Cathy
26-09-2002, 09:48 AM
Hi every body
Here a poem i wrote and want to have your comments please.
Rose alone in the dark, trying to find the peace of mind,
Thinking of future, today and past, what I have to do with that!
Am I leading the w wisdom way, or am I lost in a path so dark!
Confused in thoughts, ill in body and my mind so up and down!
Some body tells me, what to do! How to live in peace, in calm!
How to avoid feeling the dark touching my life, ruining it harsh!
How to not affect my mind with thoughts so ugly, so dark!
To feel happy or feel bad, it’s not the way I should think about!
Because running after that is just like running after car
You’ll never reach it though you try
Like happiness you seek to find
But in fact, it's just some thing goes in rush
Maybe today, maybe tonight or maybe the moment you just find!
Then, you cry, you feel down and maybe never turn the way you are!
Because sometimes, you spend long time, searching the thing you wish you have!
Troubles come and troubles go and you struggle so hard
The goal is near, and you so zeal but always things never go the way you wish!
The thing you dream of, just you’ll have it. Now and forever you’ll be so fine
No more sadness, no more tears. The day has come to new your life
Yet, you realize fact so hard but indeed so true though harm
The dream you think will change your life will make you happy, will make you fly!
Is like that but for short time, then it goes and you end up just dreaming of its back!!
Here a poem i wrote and want to have your comments please.
Rose alone in the dark, trying to find the peace of mind,
Thinking of future, today and past, what I have to do with that!
Am I leading the w wisdom way, or am I lost in a path so dark!
Confused in thoughts, ill in body and my mind so up and down!
Some body tells me, what to do! How to live in peace, in calm!
How to avoid feeling the dark touching my life, ruining it harsh!
How to not affect my mind with thoughts so ugly, so dark!
To feel happy or feel bad, it’s not the way I should think about!
Because running after that is just like running after car
You’ll never reach it though you try
Like happiness you seek to find
But in fact, it's just some thing goes in rush
Maybe today, maybe tonight or maybe the moment you just find!
Then, you cry, you feel down and maybe never turn the way you are!
Because sometimes, you spend long time, searching the thing you wish you have!
Troubles come and troubles go and you struggle so hard
The goal is near, and you so zeal but always things never go the way you wish!
The thing you dream of, just you’ll have it. Now and forever you’ll be so fine
No more sadness, no more tears. The day has come to new your life
Yet, you realize fact so hard but indeed so true though harm
The dream you think will change your life will make you happy, will make you fly!
Is like that but for short time, then it goes and you end up just dreaming of its back!!