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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Can you See Me?



NewLife
26-09-2004, 08:59 AM
Can you see me

Can you listen to me

Can you talk to me

Do not say no

Do not say I hurt you

Do not say I break your heart

How I can break your heart

If your heart is my heart

when you feel pain I feel it

when you feel happy I feel it

when You feel afraid I feel it

your are apart of my body

How can I cut this part and live normally

I can not I can not I can not by all languages I scream

I can nooooooooooooooooooooooot

Live like any one while I cut a part of my body

Tell me how can I live before you leave my life…………….


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Da S.O.S
26-09-2004, 03:13 PM
i think someone really hurt you right?
i'm so sorry if it's the truth
but we can't do anything
u have to live ur own life by yourself

nice writing but u have to use some advance words sometiems
see ya:)

NewLife
28-09-2004, 09:39 AM
Thanks to your Advice Da S.O.S i will try to use
advance words