perel
07-11-2004, 06:47 PM
Hello plz I need ur help to correct me the wrong words or to add some expression and to correct the tense of verbs because I have to present this paragraph to my teacher in university and I'm not very good in english the subject is that I have to write a paragraph in what I diid this summer
please help me in english and I will help u sure in french.and plz tell me ur opinion about it
The first day in my summer vacation started when I finished my last test exam in Biology.
I didn't believe that I finished my exams after a long and hard winter between books and papers.
My friends were very happy too ,we decided to spend a great day together.
First of all we went to dinner .after that to cinema .
everyweek my family and I spent a whole day in beirut especially in downtown where people don't sleep.
I can't forget internet,is everything for me ,I spend more than 5 hours per day on it .I can browse the whole world in front of a small screen.
During these days ,I was not very happy because I'm waiting the results of my official exams
After three weeks ,in afternoon I read the results on internet
thanks God I passed.
This is my happiest day in my life .
I called all my families and friends to share the joy.
I set a plan for what I have to do this summer.
First going to beach with friends,playing my favourite hobby basket-ball,studying for my entrance exam in lebanese university.learning drive to have my own "drive booklet" q
My uncle will come from italy,I'm very happy to see him again,we spent a great time together.
Finally is my birthday on september 16 I will be 19 years old
we made a big party with family and some friends.
My vacation is finished I will start a new year at university.
please help me in english and I will help u sure in french.and plz tell me ur opinion about it
The first day in my summer vacation started when I finished my last test exam in Biology.
I didn't believe that I finished my exams after a long and hard winter between books and papers.
My friends were very happy too ,we decided to spend a great day together.
First of all we went to dinner .after that to cinema .
everyweek my family and I spent a whole day in beirut especially in downtown where people don't sleep.
I can't forget internet,is everything for me ,I spend more than 5 hours per day on it .I can browse the whole world in front of a small screen.
During these days ,I was not very happy because I'm waiting the results of my official exams
After three weeks ,in afternoon I read the results on internet
thanks God I passed.
This is my happiest day in my life .
I called all my families and friends to share the joy.
I set a plan for what I have to do this summer.
First going to beach with friends,playing my favourite hobby basket-ball,studying for my entrance exam in lebanese university.learning drive to have my own "drive booklet" q
My uncle will come from italy,I'm very happy to see him again,we spent a great time together.
Finally is my birthday on september 16 I will be 19 years old
we made a big party with family and some friends.
My vacation is finished I will start a new year at university.