Dreams

[الملك]

HEY PPL... IM A SINGER/SONGWRITER..
.BUT HERES A POEM I WROTE WHEN I WAS ABOUT 14/15...A LONG TIME AGO...READ AND ENJOY (HOPEFULLY)

MY SLEEPING MIND WOKE...
KNOCKED ON MY WAKING MINDS DOOR
AND SOMEHOW I KNEW I
I HAD BEEN HERE BEFORE
IN MANY TIMES AND MANY PLACES
HAD SEEN MANY FACES
HAD SPANNED MY GENERATION
ACROSS DIFFERENT RACES
MY THIRD EYE SOUGHT THE SKY
TRAVELLED IN SPACES
THEN CAME TO REST LIKE
IT WAS IN CRYOSTASIS
DORMANT, TIL THE SUN,
OF MY BEING ROSE ONCE MORE
RESSURECTED,AS EXPECTED
TO KNOCK ON SOMEONE ELSES DOOR...

YOU ARE ALL A BLESSING AND AN INSPIRATION :shock22:

[Blueness]

Hi there king ….
So you like Tupac:icon6: …who doesn’t ….

Ok About the lyrics ….


They’re actually very good :fing02: … considering your age at that time..
Your rhyme is flawless …
:yup:Exceptional choice of words I must add..
But I was lost :09: in some of the parts …
:scratchchI just didn’t get what you’re driving at
And I had to look the word “Cryostasis” :22:up …
Personally ...I think you are gifted and have what it takes
to make a remarkable lyricist

Thank you for sharing "dream" with us ...and yes I did enjoy reading it


PeAcE OuT

[الملك]

hi thanks very much

about the ryhtme yeah i'm working on it .... you know its really hard well I have lot working on when I fiish I'll post it

thanks agian