perfect lover

[bAd_D]

Perfect lover

How deep is the see, how far are the stars, gurl why cant you see, how amazing you are, when am with you I feel, I feel so unreal, my heart starts to dance and you can still hear the peal, so am trying to tell you that am, in love with you, so gurl just let me show you,

When you smile my heart stops, and I don’t know what to do, it’s so true, so true.



you’re my perfect friend, perfect lover, there will be no trends; my love won’t be over, to you, as long as you want me to, gurl ill just keep loving you, ill give the world just for you, ill give my whole life too



And when I can’t sleep the night, ill be thinking of you, of the things that u like and how you love me so, and I wish I can just stop the time, and I wish I’d make you mine, till we die, oh I, am in love with u.


So whenever you’re lonely remember


That you have me thinking of you

[The Dark Heart]

Hay

yahoo :tongue2:

Way to go that was perfect :08:

WOW, Keep Up the great work :biggrin:

:09:

Ur Bro : Mohamed :31:

[bAd_D]

thanx again bro, ur a really active member :tongue2:

i promise to keep it up
peace

[TRY NO RACE]

outstanding,,,,,,,,,,,,how pity im not in love,but nevermind
this one as you said happy;) ,,,i wish you the best
peace out:)

[The Dark Heart]

And yeah bro

Try to make a poem with sentences .. it will come out so cool and good ..

.^^

[hunter-zero]

ok here and idea for ya instead of spaming the forums with all these threads why dont you stick toone thread and post all your poems there

[goldenglow]

in english poems they used the beautiful word and the similes this work could be change to better by using the unknown word such english litretures thank u and keep working up becarful