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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Pretty-Eyed Beggar



Kubaj
10-03-2005, 03:17 PM
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Hello, I wrote this last night..




the reason why I wrote this.. or my inspiration came from




a beggar I met the other day.. her eyes were really something




out of the planet-like.. I can say no more..




this one is dedicated to her.





He went to pick up his brother, in this hot unmerciful weather




all the drivers were affected by the heat.. too bad humans don't have




a cooling system for their temper !




he was - as everyone else - cursing, racing his way through the ugly traffic-jam.




they were all on the - High Alert - mode.. not because of




the - road safety - Propaganda, no, it's all about.. " the finger " .




When he arrived at the taunting Traffic-light, opening the window..




he saw that girl moving around wearing her Dark-night coloured Abaya..




Asking everyone for money.. he thought in his mind..




" i'm sure she's not saudi.. she only desires our sympathies and our money too.."




Following her with his despising eyes.. he noticed that nobody gave her a thing..




not even opening the window for her.. they waved her away..




then.. she stood there in the corner without moving..




as if she - suddenly- lost hope in those hot-tempered, cold-hearted, human beings..




the cars started to move when the devious traffic-light was green..




but it stopped again, elevating the blood pressure.. of them all.




His eyes are still, marking her movments.., she came onto his way




internally.. he panicked.. " why can't she just give up and go home.. ? "




And then, she was there.. in front of one of her hugest enemies..




she didn't say a word.. she kept looking.. silently..




when their.. eyes met.. he was shocked..




his eyes were engulfed by her endless sorrowful gazing..




enchanted by her pretty eyes.. he went berserk




searching for his wallet..




" damn .. where is my wallet.. no no .. impossible.. "




then he turned to her.. and said :




" I'm sorry I don't have my wallet right now.. "




she kept her eternal gaze.. at something..




with her drowining eyes.. uncontrollably sparkling..




without knowing why.. he said in his mind




".. why would she cry.. at least I talked to her and said that i'm sorry ?! "




and there it was.. on the other seat.. his brother's wallet .. laying there..




and so he realized.. why.




but it was too late for him, she ran off..




he felt something heavy fallen on his chest.. by this overwhelming surprise..




grabbing the wallet he opened the door.. running after her




screaming.. : " I swear I DIDN'T KNOW !!, wait please wait.."




then.. it was the chance.. to make everything worse for him..




when the deceptive traffic-light turned green..




he was startled for a moment.. he tried to keep following her.. but




there was no use.. especially when she disappeard beyond the




stressful forest.. of the angry fingers.

Blueness
12-03-2005, 01:29 PM
^^? Hey Kubaj … how’s your health

…..? http://blueness13.250free.com/PART3/wed/smilies/cry.gifthat was sad…. Why does it always have to be sad
I am too empathetic when it comes to beggars http://blueness13.250free.com/PART3/wed/smilies/sad46.gif… I pity them too easily …
But I’d rather deal with the “sitting” type of beggars ….than
the "wandering" type..

I don’t like it when they knock hard on my window … carrying a piece of
paper as an evidence of their disability … I panic every time …
I don’t know why …but I feel kinda' threatened …


Anyways …
I wish I could meet this pretty eyed beggar … who knows...
Maybe I will...Someday

Thank you for sharing her story with us...


http://blueness13.250free.com/PART3/wed/smilies/thinking.gif?I’m curious to know… who would be your next muse

Another_One
13-03-2005, 08:52 AM
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:17: when i saw this eyes:( ...i realized i will cry


:31: what a pity words

:33: really i don't know what to say and how to say my feeling

:08: Hope u forgive me

Kubaj
14-03-2005, 05:52 PM
thank you all, I just want to tell you that suddenly

a bad moon's light struck me and I entered a very nasty state of mood

so I can only say thank you for replying and sorry for not giving you a good piece of my mind