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مستر حريقة
05-04-2005, 10:49 PM
"Someone Digging in the Ground"

An eye is meant to see things,
The soul is here for its own joy.
A head has one use: for loving a true love.
Legs: to run after.

Love is for vanishing into the sky. The mind,
for learning what men have done and tried to do.
Mysteries are not to be solved. The eye goes blind
when it only wants to see why.

A lover is always accused of something.
But when he finds his love, whatever was lost
in the looking comes back completely changed.
On the way to Mecca, many dangers: thieves,
the blowing sand, only camel's milk to drink.
Still each pilgrim kisses the black stone there
with pure longing, feeling in the surface
the taste of the lips he wants.

This talk is like stamping new coins. They pile up,
while the real work is done outside
by someone digging in the ground.




pls pls pls post anything for this poem :أفكر:

u can say its bad :boggled: u can say its stupid words :33:


just post anything here :08:

المكاويه
06-04-2005, 01:44 AM
:D nice
:biggrin: nice
very nice
:biggthump keep on man
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:06: why shall we say its bad
its really a good one
specially ur mentioning Mecca
and the black stone
:D u made me happy reading this poem
*******
;) i have a comment here


A head has one use: for loving a true love

:28: i disagree
:the head has some uses
:08: to purify the mistakes of the heart
and to keep good deeds,, one has already done
:o like protecting good friendships
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:09: thank u for this semi-poem
it misses the rhyme
or what we call in Arabic
القافيه
:06: doesnt it

مستر حريقة
07-04-2005, 08:39 PM
my sister المكاوية:)

thank alot for supporting me with ur sweetie words

iam really embaressed i dunno wut to say :o

thank u again for posting

and if :17: i still alive :أفكر: :shock22: i promise iam gonna support u with more of my poems ;)


thanks for the third time sister :08: