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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : نكاش روس Big Mistake by



مستر حريقة
06-04-2005, 10:59 PM
;) Big Mistake


,for the all mistakes i've ever made
.falling in love with you, makes the grade
.Months of fighting for what i thought was mine
,When you could really care less
.and hurting me was just fine

.When reality hit, and the tears finally fell
,You Shrugged your shoulders
"! hung up, and said "Oh well
You might have won this battle
.of breaking my heart
But your day will come
.when all you have is lost, and fallen apart

,Though I'm not the type to cheer pain on
.When it comes your way
,I'll be the first to say
"He got what he deserves, the low- life con"

.Well good- bye for now is the last I'll say
!And I cant wait for your sad, hurtful, and lonely day




:vereymad: :vereymad: i hope u will like it my brother Another_One

Kubaj
07-04-2005, 02:57 AM
hai hai... not bad bro keep it up

Star_Fire
07-04-2005, 06:49 AM
wow

that was Cute نكاش روس
keep it up sweety
we really need some more of these unique words
Thanx

مستر حريقة
07-04-2005, 08:32 PM
Dear my dear brother King_Kubaj
thanks for reading and posting on my poem
and hope u come always;)

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Hey my sister Star_Fire

How r u doin?

I didnt c u posting long time :33:

anyway

thanks for posting and for supporting me with ur friendly words:D

come again on my next poems:reporter:

المكاويه
07-04-2005, 11:57 PM
:bigeyes: oh my God

:06: i believe there is no such a person,, isnt it
how could any HUMAN do such harmful actions towards those who might have loved him/her
:o it rally says the something about rude and cruel ppl
!!!!Heartless
!!!!Heartless
!!!!this action would really be heartless
"but, anyway, could this lover say"He got what he deserves
:28: i dont think so
!!!!almost impossible
:o those who r warm-hearted can never be heartless
whatever was the cause
**************
:( thank u so much for this sad poem
;) keep up the hard work dear brother

spider girl
08-04-2005, 07:31 PM
Hi dear brother... how r u?? I wish u gonna bring one of your nice poems
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:08:
:08:
nice one maaaaaan... especielly this part

Well good- bye for now is the last I'll say
!And I cant wait for your sad, hurtful, and lonely day
thank u very much... and i hope to read more of your intresting poems

bye

مستر حريقة
08-04-2005, 09:05 PM
:bigeyes: oh my God


:06: i believe there is no such a person,, isnt it
how could any HUMAN do such harmful actions towards those who might have loved him/her
:o it rally says the something about rude and cruel ppl
!!!!Heartless
!!!!Heartless
!!!!this action would really be heartless
"but, anyway, could this lover say"He got what he deserves
:28: i dont think so
!!!!almost impossible
:o those who r warm-hearted can never be heartless
whatever was the cause
**************
:( thank u so much for this sad poem
;) keep up the hard work dear brother

Thanks u so much my dear sister for the nice words u posted and hope u enjoy all my poems

pls keep on

but i really wanna c some of urs :33:


thank again dude

مستر حريقة
08-04-2005, 09:23 PM
Hi dear brother... how r u?? I wish u gonna bring one of your nice poems

:08:
:08:
:08:
nice one maaaaaan... especielly this part

thank u very much... and i hope to read more of your intresting poems

bye













hi my sister Spider_Girl
iam fine thanx i hope u also gonna be fine

thanks for posting
and i think ur new in the english forum

if u r u r welcome and join us pls
:7: :shock22:
thanks again