first postin: poem

[the duke]

tell me what u think



Hells


When you live in this planet with people around

When you feel that life is just going in rounds

And when you notice how inferior you may be

You'll find out that you are the king under-ground



You wake up every morning with the sunrise

You live your moments with lots of lies

And you wait till the end of the day

To notice that your soul is never wise



You live your routine just with empty souls

You live with your soul without a precious goal

And you know that nothing in your life time

Will ever be your friendly joyful doll



You go to the street and you meet old friends

You draw your face with a smile you don’t understand

And you get flattered by everyone you meet

Yet you wonder when the day will ever end



You look up to the faraway blue sky

You see that life is just going wild

And when you look to the ocean

The only thing you'll see is my empty life



I had enough from everyone

I hate when I used to run

And I hate when I hide

Because my hell is done

[Another_One]

tell me what u think

Hells


When you live in this planet with people around

When you feel that life is just going in rounds

And when you notice how inferior you may be

You'll find out that you are the king under-ground



You wake up every morning with the sunrise

You live your moments with lots of lies

And you wait till the end of the day

To notice that your soul is never wise



You live your routine just with empty souls

You live with your soul without a precious goal

And you know that nothing in your life time

Will ever be your friendly joyful doll



You go to the street and you meet old friends

You draw your face with a smile you don’t understand

And you get flattered by everyone you meet

Yet you wonder when the day will ever end



You look up to the faraway blue sky

You see that life is just going wild

And when you look to the ocean

The only thing you'll see is my empty life



I had enough from everyone

I hate when I used to run

And I hate when I hide

Because my hell is done





be patient friend

:( may be ur hell is better than mine

so don't think that u r alone with pains

.................

great poem ....

[مستر حريقة]

:wow: Wut a wonderful poem

come on just get a grip

everyone has pains so..... just be as patient as u could


thanks dear and keep it up ;)

[the duke]

10k u another one" and "نكاش روس" for ur comments