Darkness & lightness

[Settlers 5]

i wrote a poem 4 u in a couple of day's here it is



in the darknes i see

in my dream

some lightness

and some steam


i'v became afread

from this darkness

nobody tell wut to do

the sultion is go to the lightness



i didn't go to the sultion

so the darkness is inside of me

and i have some voilence

but i heard some noise inside of me



i see light in my path

asKing me to play

and some one asKing me to stay

idid lsn to the path

and some one is saying hey wake up

:biggthump so i woke up and i drink some of 7up

and the dream stoped and i see some of our gass

Now it was the end of class


hope u like it;)

[المكاويه]

:biggthump nice one brother

....about the darkness coming from inside
i agree
its not around us
:o its inside us
everyone can change the darkness into light by changing the inside
...hopeful thinking
.......useful reading
and
;) shining writing
just try to change urself
:o and everything would change as a result

thank u for the poem
:biggthump and the idea itself
*****
:a comment
try to focus on the grammar and spelling
in order to have a perfect poem
;) bless u

[مستر حريقة]

thanks bro very good

keep it up

best wishes;)