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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Please, Dad



مستر حريقة
15-05-2005, 02:10 AM
HI
:o


As soft winds sweep away the days
I look back on life through a haze
Remember playgrounds, parks and friends
In childlike gaze that never ends
The laughter in a game of catch
Shall memory ever attach
To innocence in youthful eyes
Catching the ball to Dad's surprise

I recall my first bike, first wreck
Who picked me up, said, What the heck
Convinced me to give one more try
While, knees skinned, I forgot to cry
Just the joy knowing he was there
Making him proud my only care
There was nothing I couldn't do
My heart held fast that to be true

Though teenage years were kind of rough
I sure wasn't too big or tough
You taught me to defend what's right
And never back down from a fight
So I learned the hard way to stand
Still, with each lump, I found your hand
Drawing from you an inner strength
And stubborn pride of equal length

But there the line of fate was drawn
As though I blinked and you were gone
I found myself facing the sun
Not man, not boy, fatherless, one
Eyes blinded by a void inside
I could not live that you had died
Alas finding it to be true
I could do nothing without you

Please, Dad, today just hear my call
I'm sorry that I dropped the ball
My life is wrecked, my knees are skinned
My emotions undisciplined
I can't get up although I try
Please don't be upset if I cry
Though I can't fight what I can't see



hope u enjoy it guys and girls:ciao: :02:


Please, Dad, say you're still proud of me

the duke
16-05-2005, 12:00 PM
woooooooooooooooooooooooow



INCREDIBLE poem

that's the best for u.... i can't describe how much i liked it

it's rhymed and a great topic and excellent expression

CONGRATULATION





BEST REGARDS

THE DUKE

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16-05-2005, 02:53 PM
:jap004: Wow :jap021: .. excellent work nakash ..I truelly liked it ..keep on the good work

المكاويه
16-05-2005, 09:08 PM
:wow: oh my God
amazing
:biggthump so much amazing
incredible
very very very very beautiful words dear brother
i liked them sooooo much
:o they just touh the heart
one's father-specially girls- is the most important aspect in life
let me say it here
im so proud of my father
:05: and i love him soooooo much
May Allah bless him

thank u Nakash for this poem
;) http://images.montada.com/buttons/reputation.gif (http://www.montada.com/showthread.php?p=3532522#)it really deserves an

مستر حريقة
16-05-2005, 10:00 PM
woooooooooooooooooooooooow



INCREDIBLE poem
that's the best for u.... i can't describe how much i liked it
it's rhymed and a great topic and excellent expression
CONGRATULATION


BEST REGARDS


THE DUKE


thanks dude 4 ur big wow :D :p

thanks for posting and supporting me
it really means alot of someone posting here

تحياتي..........(نكاش روس) :D

مستر حريقة
16-05-2005, 10:08 PM
[QUOTE=blank] :jap004: Wow :jap021: .. excellent work nakash ..I truelly liked it ..keep on the good work [/QUOTE

thanks dear for posting and fortunatily u liked it

تحياتي.......(نكاش روس) :D

مستر حريقة
16-05-2005, 10:20 PM
:wow: oh my God
amazing
:biggthump so much amazing
incredible
very very very very beautiful words dear brother
i liked them sooooo much


thanks sister for ur soft words
iam sure u can do much better than me


:o they just touh the heart

i dont really know wut r u meaning by touh



one's father-specially girls- is the most important aspect in life
let me say it here
im so proud of my father
:05: and i love him soooooo much
May Allah bless him


good for u>>>>>> ur dad is a lucky man :D



thank u Nakash for this poem

ur welcome sister



(http://www.montada.com/showthread.php?p=3532522#);) http://images.montada.com/buttons/reputation.gif (http://www.montada.com/showthread.php?p=3532522#)it really deserves an
(http://www.montada.com/showthread.php?p=3532522#)

thanks alots for ur kindness
for ur voting
and for being nice
:p