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Y a z e e d
19-05-2005, 10:34 PM
Revolution



http://3x5.jeeran.com/revoultions.jpg




Today, I will raise the sails of revolution. I will shatter my old grapple and cruise, until the last drop of the oceans, seizing the moment, flouting the indestructible. I will rebel against my old gloomy love. Not principles nor beliefs have the power to halt my dreaming spirit, no one have the authority to block my faith from going on and on, deep within the moment.



I will weep a river of tears; no one will sweep my fallen shaded tears. I was thrashing and the world was seeking me to tear apart my pillars of sorrow and grief. So deep inside of me lies the dream. These grins of emotion are blemishing my vision of the passionate universe. Seize my heart with that warm hand of yours. Never let go of it, I inherit it to you, while I am sprinting to the horizon.



I will leave to an unreachable sky. Where no one dwells, hell is beneath and heaven is above. O, weary corpses, I am your son, the heir of your dreary misery.



Once, a youthful day, full of joy, I wandered in the land of light, where delightfulness stretched and peacefulness dwelt. Stars were shooting their endless spears of love. No one but I lived there, in happiness and joy. Out of sight, out of speech. Alone with colorful lilies and the aged sky, I walked, spoke, loved, and felt happily with no one but the ex-hel dweller , me.



My boat cruised, my friends shrouded in pale clouds. They left me alone in joy with memories, a dead soul. Wandering in deep heavens with my dream awaken, solitude, eternal solitude.






… And the dream was awakened


in the past.













p.s : this is my first try in english prose. If it is tidous telorate me this time only.

Trapped Inside
20-05-2005, 12:11 AM
the only Revolution i know is the new Console from Nintendo :D

ummmm .. about the thread ..

nice and deep words ^^ .. and from the looks of it .. u have a painful life right ? .. well we all kinda do ..

and " If i Had Wings .. I'll Fly to Konoha ! " .. lol .. yup .. that's what am gonna do .. :p

just cheer up a little bit ,, and soon everything will be fine .. *hopes* ..

Great start for an English thread ^^ .. we'll be waiting for more ^^ ..

See ya man ^^ ..

R.A.E.F
20-05-2005, 03:11 PM
u r right trapped inside its a very meaningfull words

:ciao: and its touching thanx a lot yazeed

the duke
21-05-2005, 08:09 PM
hey الــــــرائـــف how r u

i kinda like ur proses where poawerfull words and expressions are used
i also liked the the rhytme


i liked the ending


… And the dream was awakened


in the past.

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THE DUKE

NaughtY AngeL
06-06-2005, 06:28 PM
Ya Allah that was depressing, but in a good way lol
Masha'Allah your expressions are striking
And your style is very attracting even though it was a bit mysterious at the beginning, which made it more amazing of course
Masha'Allah I didn't know that it was you who wrote it, it's like I'm reading on of those literature books that I usually don't like to read lol
Ciao for now

hunter-zero
06-06-2005, 10:39 PM
wow nice dude bet it`ll make a major heavy metal song! :D

Kubaj
07-06-2005, 02:35 PM
incredible work yazeed.. nice romantic image