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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A gift To A smoker ;)



YemenPatriot
11-06-2005, 06:44 PM
Asslam Alikom Wrahmatuallahi Wabraktouh

How are you All.

Here is a small poem i wrote about the feeling of any smoker in this planet, and his wishes to quit this habit.

I hope if u cant quit this habit, atleast try to reduce it, if not for then for all of us, u dont know how dear you are to us. And dont forget your duty in this life.

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How to start what to say



Made my life sad, and also astray



Taking a stick and looking for the ashtray



That takes my life from the happiness away





I feel it cool and it give me relax



I didn’t know that it takes my heart under an axe



It’s full of nicotine, tar and also wax



The truth is!!!! It delivered my life to a fake relax





When I will quit that is my wish



I want that, but I am really selfish



I love the cigarette and it’s my favorite dish



It’s for me, like the sea for the fish





But today I will swear to quit it



How and why I will not question it



As long am in faith and I believe in it



I lived in suffer and I admit it





I am a Muslim that control his desire



A simple stick will not affect my entire



I will throw it and quit it and give it a retire



Coz I am really from it so tire.







Don’t forget you gave an oath



Take that stick away from your mouth



Throw that packet from north to south



Return that smile and rinse you mouth
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Hope u liked it. Take care all

Wasslam Alikom Wrahmatuallahi Wabrkatouh


Your Brother in Islam and Faith

YemenPatriot

مستر حريقة
11-06-2005, 07:18 PM
وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته اخي:)

Very very very nice work from u dude:wow:

its really cool words, i enjoyed them:biggthump

keep ur hard work up:jester:

May God bless u:ciao:

تحياتي...( نكاش روس ):reporter:

HIROSHI_11
11-06-2005, 07:56 PM
Hi bro,
really it's a nice poem:biggthump
Keep it up

waiting for new from you
Bye:ciao:

Another_One
11-06-2005, 08:45 PM
When I will quit that is my wish

I want that, but I am really selfish

I love the cigarette and it’s my favorite dish

It’s for me, like the sea for the fish







:أفكر: Wonderful and powerful words

:05: thanx brother .....keep ur skills working

المكاويه
12-06-2005, 03:48 AM
:biggthump Very nice poem brother

thank u so much
:o i wish those smokers would understand how dangerous it is
:أفكر: i wish they can quit
May Allah help all muslims to quit these bad habits
thank u again
bless u
:ciao:

YemenPatriot
12-06-2005, 01:59 PM
Asslam alikom Wrahmatuallahi Wabraktouh


How are you all anti smoking brothers and sister ;) . Alhamdulilaah that u enjoyed the poem, wishing u a happy and healthy environement , free from smoke and even smokers :33: take care all wallah ma3aaakom

Asslam alikom wrahmataullahi wabraktouh

حبيبة نكاش روس
12-06-2005, 02:56 PM
great work from u brother

very nice poem

thank u