I wrote it

[GRACIELA]

Wazzup Folks!!:ds015:

:ds011: I wrote this poem & I was thinkin' of takin' ur opinions

:dot: PLZ tell me wot do u think of this one

I wanna fly

spread my wings & soar

I wanna cry

can't hold on any more

I wanna die

what the hell am I livin' for?

Ciao:ciao:

[BecKhaM Buff]

HA HA HA HA


WASS UP

LOOoOOL

NICE TOPIC SIS


THANX

[مستر حريقة]

Wazzup Folks!!:ds015:

:ds011: I wrote this poem & I was thinkin' of takin' ur opinions

:dot: PLZ tell me wot do u think of this one

I wanna fly

spread my wings & soar

I wanna cry

can't hold on any more

I wanna die

what the hell am I livin' for?

Ciao:ciao:


Its just great:o

keep it up sis:ciao:

[GRACIELA]

HA HA HA HA


WASS UP

LOOoOOL

NICE TOPIC SIS


THANX




Is there anything funny?!!:bigeyes:

[psx-ps3-ps3-ps4]

Hi sis
How are you?

A very nice poem

I like it really

But you know you'd better focus in one emotion
Because in the first two lines you express joy and passion
Then You suddenly express pain and sorrow

Still, it is very nice and the rhym and rhythem is perfect

Thank you very much

Keep it up

Bye

[GRACIELA]

Hi sis
How are you?

A very nice poem

I like it really

But you know you'd better focus in one emotion
Because in the first two lines you express joy and passion
Then You suddenly express pain and sorrow

Still, it is very nice and the rhym and rhythem is perfect

Thank you very much

Keep it up

Bye

:o Well, I focused on one emotion
it's like am a prisoner and I wanna be free
That's why I wanna fly ,cry & die
I don't know if u got my point:أفكر:

Anyway ThanX Bro:D

[Lips Licker]

though it's short, it's amazing yo


let love lead the way


thnx GRACIELA (http://www.montada.com/member.php?u=277147)
nice name btw

[GRACIELA]

Merci Beaucoup :05:

[المكاويه]

:أفكر: Hiiiiiiiiiiii
:biggthump nice poem dear
but the idea is terrible
we must have sth to live for
;) just think about it
thank u so much for the poem
keep it up

[GRACIELA]

:أفكر: Hiiiiiiiiiiii

:biggthump nice poem dear
but the idea is terrible
we must have sth to live for
;) just think about it
thank u so much for the poem
keep it up



ThanX Babe:ds011:
I'll put dat in mind

but whenever i think 'bout writin' sth, I write sth like dat
:jap013: am good at expressin' my anger & depression
But when it comes to expressin' happiness, I dunno wot happens :jap015: