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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Mama


GRACIELA
19-09-2005, 10:50 AM
Mama , you're so precious to me

You always wants the best for me

You're the candle that lights my way

You're the one who brights my day

Ain't nothin' gonna tear us apart

you're always gonna stay in my heart


:D Written By: Graciela


PLZ tell me ur opinion & don't be negative like most of the times :06:
المكاويه
19-09-2005, 12:04 PM
coooooooooool
:05: thats really so much cooooool
nice feelings ,, dear
our moms r the most important person in life
:أفكر: may Allah bless them and protect them
thank u so much dear
H-Hunter
19-09-2005, 12:18 PM
Very nice although a bit short

You did a good job by not repeating the same letter for the whole poem which what proffesional people usually do

Keep up this spirit and we will wait for your next work

See ya
مستر حريقة
19-09-2005, 02:26 PM
nice work sister

Ur words r just so great



thanx and waitting more ^^:o
GRACIELA
19-09-2005, 04:44 PM
Very nice although a bit short

You did a good job by not repeating the same letter for the whole poem which what proffesional people usually do

Keep up this spirit and we will wait for your next work

See ya

:02: I know that it's short :أفكر: but most of my poems are just 4 lines
:09: so this is the longest one i've ever written
and I promise that I'll try my best 2 write long ones:biggthump

;)THANX EVERYBODY 4 RESPONDING :ciao:
dana_2005
19-09-2005, 06:21 PM
wow wow
coooool
very beautiful words
my god bless my mother
thanx baby very gret word
and
see ya
GRACIELA
21-09-2005, 09:45 AM
wow wow
coooool
very beautiful words
my god bless my mother
thanx baby very gret word
and
see ya

God bless all the moms around the world
and thanx honey 4 respondin:ciao: