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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : friendship peom



lilies
28-12-2005, 12:01 PM
Standing by
All the way
Here to help you through your day

Holding you up
When you are weak
Helping you find what it is you seek

Catching your tears
When you cry
Pulling you through when the tide is high

Just being there
Through thick and thin
All just to say, you are my friend:biggthump

hunter-zero
28-12-2005, 01:49 PM
not bad not bad

maybe try to make it longer next time , good luck

Gankutsuou
28-12-2005, 10:14 PM
thnx for the poem :biggthump :biggthump
it's really simple and short but nice , keep it up :) :) :) :) :)

lilies
01-01-2006, 01:14 PM
aha i see u want it 2 be longer i see next time inshallah i will make it longer

lilies
01-01-2006, 01:16 PM
thanks inshallah i will keep it up