!!you came back

[Ahmed Blight]

hi every body

i wrote those words today lol

and i want to your opinion




past..present..future

you lived in all of them

you lived in my heart and my mind

you was my life

you was always in my side

but you left

?why you left me

you dont have an answer

but i know the anwer

Dreams..histories..and ambitions

?were they the reasons

!!you left me for them

and now you came back




you came to tell me sorry

what sorry can do now

you broke my heart an left

you choose the wrong way

you choose the wrong time

and now i cant forgive you


now i forget you

...Now you`re just a memory

in my head

!!you have to forget me
so

its farewell


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[joethehunter]

:) :) :)

Hello my dear friend
Nice poem .... Nice attempt
Just let me tell you something
True love is difficult to
die
Whatever we do to try to pretend it is over
and that there is no longer
love anymore , in fact love is still there deep in the heart ... So , wait for
some time , you might change your mind
tomorrow




See you


:ciao: :ciao: :ciao:

[Ahmed Blight]

:) :) :)

Hello my dear friend
Nice poem .... Nice attempt
Just let me tell you something
True love is difficult to
die
Whatever we do to try to pretend it is over
and that there is no longer
love anymore , in fact love is still there deep in the heart ... So , wait for
some time , you might change your mind
tomorrow




See you


:ciao: :ciao: :ciao:


thanks for your replay bro

sure true love never dies but it can be a memorie

[Digerati]

Nice Poem..

Of course there are a few mistakes..

But nevertheless a nice idea and a good way of laying it out

Take Care my friend

[hunter-zero]

good one mate fixed some typos for ya , there marked in blue


[
center]hi every body

i wrote those words today lol

and i want to your opinion




past..present..future

you lived in all of them

you lived in my heart and my mind

you were my life

you were always on my side

but you left

?why did you leave me[/center]

you dont have an answer

but i know the anwer

Dreams..history..and ambitions

?were they the reasons

!!you left me for them

and now you came back




you came to tell me sorry

what can sorry do now

you broke my heart an left

you choose the wrong way

you choose the wrong time

and now i cant forgive you


now i forget you

...Now you`re just a memory

in my head

!!you have to forget me
so

its farewell


http://city.9sky.com/non-cgi/usr/27/27_4200_28.gif




i hope that was helpful

cheers

(p.s: history cant be a plural)

[Ahmed Blight]

Nice Poem..


Of course there are a few mistakes..

But nevertheless a nice idea and a good way of laying it out

Take Care my friend


lol
thanks Bro for your replay
thanks again Bro
bye

[Ahmed Blight]

good one mate fixed some typos for ya , there marked in blue




i hope that was helpful

cheers

(p.s: history cant be a plural)


looool
thank you very much Bro
:D sure that was helpful
thanks
:ciao: bye