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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : The Day She Slept Away



Eve
17-02-2006, 01:24 AM
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بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم ..
i wrote this when my sis died two months ago ..


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I Woke Up Today
I Feel Sad , I Don't Know Why
It Was 3 AM
I Looked Again
Yes , It's 3 AM
It's Early To Woke , I Slipped Into My Bed
Trying To Get Some Peaceful Sleep
I Couldn't
I Just Couldn't
I'm Feeling That I Lost Something
Something
Not Anything
I Took A Quick Look In The Room
Nothing's Really Missing
My I-Pod On The Shelf
My Clothes Throwed On The Ground
Everything In It's Place
But Wait ..
There Is Something Missing ..
I Looked In My Sister Bed
She Wasn't There
Where Did She Go At This Time !?
Ow .. She's So Frustrating ..
She Knows That I'm Afraid Of The Dark
I Was Too Afraid To Look For Her
It Was Dark ..
And I'm Afraid Of The Dark
But
The Door Is Closed Tightly ..
If She Closed It I Would've Heard It ..
Well Let's Say I Was In Deep Sleep
May Be The Snoring Was Loud For Not Hearing The Sound Of The Door ?
Well .. Everything's Possible ..
" Lindsay .. Lindsay .. Where Are You .. ? "
" Lindsay , Please I'm Scaaaared "
Huumphhhh
She Likes To Do This To Me
" Ok Fine , Don't Need Your Help "
I Quickly Jumped Off My Bed And Opened the Lights ..
Oww .. Now I Feel Good ..
I Washed My Face ..
" Where Is My Towel ? "
I Stepped Into My Room To Take It ..
But Wait A Sec ..
Her Bed Hasn't Be Touched ..
WHAT THE ..........
Then I Remembered That She's Not Here ..
I Remembered What Happened Last Day
Now I Remeber Everything ..
I Remembered That She's Slipped Away ..
I Cryed A Little More ..
Got Into My Bed ..
And Have A Long Sleep ..
It's A Night I Won't Forgot ..
The Night My Soulmate Slipped Away ..
The Night That She Slept Away ..
Away From Me ..
Now She's Gone ..
And I'm Moving On ..

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ALBDWEE
17-02-2006, 02:42 PM
Thank you miss evants for this poetry it's realy sad
i think i feel like you felt two months age because my uncle died yesterday
thank you and الله يرحمها

ALBDWEE
17-02-2006, 02:44 PM
oh sorry i forgot can say what i-pod mean

Eve
17-02-2006, 03:24 PM
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Hello Mr ,
It's So Sad To Lost Someone Close To You ..
But She's In God Hand So There Is No Worry About Her ..
About The I-Pod , Search In Google Images And Type : I-Pod ,,
It's An MP3 Player , Advanced One ..

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ALBDWEE
17-02-2006, 05:52 PM
thank you very much and i wish to meet you in another thread :ciao:
and bye

matrix4ever
17-02-2006, 06:19 PM
oooh god when i read this poetry i thought it's only a poetry

then i realized it's a real story poetry

i'm sorry .. my condolences to you

you need only faith in those sitiuations and i believe you have it !

Remee-chan
21-02-2006, 07:32 PM
-_- sorry about ur sister
I hope she is in a better place now

about ur poem well it was good -^^- nice vocabs

try to write more dear -^^-

atiq
01-06-2006, 11:28 AM
sorry abuot ur sister we hope she is now at the best place
what u need that stronger faith
and my deep condelences to you

and thanks for the nice poem

ALcATRAZ
24-06-2006, 02:39 AM
Sorry for your sister :(
I hope that made your belief stronger