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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : above the sky


no entery
14-07-2006, 05:02 PM
above the sky

burning my heart won't make you win
I will be here, standing on the edge

waiting for the wind
to take me with her wings
flying above the sky
carrying my tears , to give them to the clouds
my pain 's washing by the rain
each sad moment is going away
reviving my happy days
these wounds are going to heal
indeed I need to fly away
carrying all the past wounds,with me
I will give them to the clouds again
to wash the rest of my wounds
feeling alright

leaving to another place
where, my past and my future have gone away .

by memo89
مستر حريقة
15-07-2006, 12:30 AM
Good one

:D so cool and nice

Thanx, n' keep it up

:) N R
no entery
15-07-2006, 12:36 AM
thanks bro,for cheering me up
u are so supporting....
god bless ya
bye
Lips Licker
16-07-2006, 10:31 PM
It's pretty good


burning my heart won't make you win


:biggthump I like this line the most

keep it up
Nerine
17-07-2006, 01:58 AM
Yes my dear... be like what you wrote strong girl with confidence



Doesn't care about the pain and the wounds in the past



open a white page and continue your life



I hope the best wishes to you and never see anything might make you

disappointed or sad.



thanks





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If there any mistakes:33: forgive me ...I'm not in high level yet:09:
no entery
17-07-2006, 03:43 AM
thanks u two
for ur lovely passing by
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:: HiDEY ::
29-07-2006, 05:35 PM
:: SaLaaM::
Lovely poem... so full of effection ...

there's is this old saying .. " He who has no past , has no future" keep that in mind and know this , we shouldn't forget the past .. we should learn all thats good from it .. we should "filtre" it not leave it behind and move on ..
:: Best of Luck::
:: HiDEY ::
29-07-2006, 05:40 PM
:: SaLaaM::
Lovely poem... so full of effection ...

there's is this old saying .. " He who has no past , has no future" keep that in mind and know this , we shouldn't forget the past .. we should learn all thats good from it .. we should "filtre" it not leave it behind and move on ..
:: Best of Luck::