.--No Longer BROKEN--.

[xToOotax]

hi guys..

i wrote this poem hour ago..

its the best i got

hope u like it^^

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NO LONGER "BROKEN"


Look into my eyes
i crossed over
the tears of sadness
i've carried on
i'm NO LONGER "BROKEN"

***

No.. nobody changed me
i was born "me"
and i ll always be me
maybe my life changed a little bit
since u been gone
but i moved on
i'm NO LONGER "BROKEN"

***

u have no idea about the pain u put me through
the suffering
the stress in my head
the tears i dropped
it felt like getting killed every day
i couldn't sense any thing around me
i was almost dead
except
that I WAS "BROKEN"

***

that pain i've been through
was more than i can take
i just relized
what does it feel
to be lonly
its A LIVING HELL

***

cos
no matter how much i screamed
no one is gonna hear me
and no matter how much i cried
no one is gonna see me
and no matter how much i talked
no one is gonna understand me
and no matter what i do
no one is gonna feel me
why should i bother??

***

this is the way i used to live
but .. look at me now
u've become apast!
i left u behind
and i moved on with my life
i forgot about the sadness ..
the tears..
the fears..
and everything related to u


wanna know why my friend??
cos i'm .." NO LONGER BROKEN"


****

thats it..
so what do u think?
should i keep on writing ?

tell me ... im waiting^^

c ya^^..:)

[mr.small]

Good morning pal ... :bigeyes: ... woow all from your mind

and before an hour ago

what did you have on breakfast today bean ?:09:

how about writing some divans :09: ... ya know get some money ..
I'll help ya if you want

see ya

[xToOotax]

Good morning pal ... :bigeyes: ... woow all from your mind

good morning budy^^
yup.. i swear

and before an hour ago
i wrote it and then i read it and i thought its nice y dont everybody read it?

what did you have on breakfast today bean ?:09:
believe or not ... NOTHING
^^normaly i dont eat breakfast

how about writing some divans :09: ... ya know get some money ..
I'll help ya if you want
divans?..
im such an idiot plz explain^^
----
c ya^^

[mr.small]

divan = ديوان شعري

eny way I was kiding

by th way breakfast is imprtent ya know

see ya

[مستر حريقة]

Nice,Very nice work man

keep on writting

;) you've got a kool mind

Thanks alot

N R

[xToOotax]

divan = ديوان شعري


ahaaa


eny way I was kiding
no its nice idea .. but not 4 me!!


by th way breakfast is imprtent ya know
lol
one mom is enough !!



c ya^^

[xToOotax]

Nice,Very nice work man



keep on writting

;) you've got a kool mind


thx .. im blushing ^^
but ya know that im a girl right??

Thanks alot
welcome

[:: HiDEY ::]

:: SaLaaMz::
I can sence the passion you have .. Masha'Allah... I like writing myself .. I'm consediring posting some stuff of mine in here ... I think we have some really warm family here .. poeple are all so nice and supportive why wouldn't we share our work with ..
::take care::

[xToOotax]

:: SaLaaMz::
hiii


I can sence the passion you have .. Masha'Allah...

thx pal^^




I like writing myself .. I'm consediring posting some stuff of mine in here ... I think we have some really warm family here .. poeple are all so nice and supportive why wouldn't we share our work with ..


good 4 u
i think its nice idea..
keep on hard work




::take care::


u 2
c ya^^