leave me alone

[noralshams]

guys i like to write poems, so please if my writing is not good just tell me so i won't tire my hand writing, ok please tell me the truth and
only the truth



If i have to live without you
first i have to stop thinking about you
i have to put up with all this fear by myself cuz you are not there
life is not fair you should've been here
now i have to turn my back i have to go and never look back
now i have to forget you
forget that i have loved you one day
forget my happiness when you said you will stay
don't say you are sorry
i needed you but you broke my heart
just leave my alone
and don't say you are sorry
now i have to turn my back i have to go and never look back
life is not fair so from now on i will be aware




again the truth please guys tell me only the truth, and if you guys said that you like it i will write more i have poems in arabic too if you like this one i will write the other ones too ok

[Mr.FMZ]

forget that i have loved you one day
forget my happiness when you said you will stay
جميلة جداً .. والمطلوب منك الاستمرار بالكتابة سواء كانت جميلة أو لا .. لأننا جئنا لنستفيد ونطور من انفسنا..
واضيف شي انو مو لازم تعجب الجميع عشان الواحد يكتب ..
ننتظر منك المزيد
يعطيك العافية وبالتوفيق
بدر

[Mr.MooT]

هههههههههههههههههههههه
حبيبي مافهمت شي بس
اقول انا ترجمة الكلام وحلو بس ك قافيه بل انجليزي ما اعرفها ومشكوور
وصح السانك

[جِهَاد و كَفَى]

ينقل لقسم اللغة الإنجليزية

[مستر حريقة]

Thank you very much sister

^^ words like this would really be among em best

keep on writting

N R

[:: HiDEY ::]

Amazing .. Great rhymes
go go go and never stop
all the best and good luck
take care , sis

[Amanda~]

it is truely beautiful like your words very nice
keep it up sis and as long as it have a meanning to you
the poem is beautiful more
keep it up

[noralshams]

thanx guys for supporting me i will write some more

[Al Bhed Girl]

Peace be upon you guys ..

What I`m gonna say is ..

I found this poem close 2 the heart ..
Because of the deep meaning words, the true emotions , the rythem

Its all so real , & I truely got touched by your poem ..
It remindes me of some 1 ..thats why I felt im all going with the lines

is it your 1st poem in English ?? .:33:

anyway..
Your poem is more than amaizing , Its so hounest ..
I encourage you 2 keep on the hard work !;)
I realy realy cant waite 2 read the next one..:o
Good Jobe mashallah:)

~!~ Al Bhed Girl ~!~

[noralshams]

Peace be upon you guys ..



What I`m gonna say is ..


I found this poem close 2 the heart ..
Because of the deep meaning words, the true emotions , the rythem


Its all so real , & I truely got touched by your poem ..
It remindes me of some 1 ..thats why I felt im all going with the lines


is it your 1st poem in English ?? .:33:


anyway..
Your poem is more than amaizing , Its so hounest ..
I encourage you 2 keep on the hard work !;)
I realy realy cant waite 2 read the next one..:o
Good Jobe mashallah:)



~!~ Al Bhed Girl ~!~

thanx so much i hope the u like the ones i am gonna write in arabic too