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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Forgive me my friend



sensei
12-06-2007, 02:31 PM
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Hi everyone… this is a new poem from me
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I wrote this to my friend who was a friend for 5 years and I
had never given her a gift… so I wrote this poem and buy her a
^_^gift and put it in her locker at school



She was really happy and in the break she gave me a big deep
hug thanking me… I like here although I was very rude and cruel
with here in the past



So I wrote this poem to her to forgive me…



Also… in the end I wrote my feeling toward our school… coz one
night they asked the talented girls to go with them somewhere
and they lied at us… they said there will be no guys only girls but
they lied… I went back home angrily and I hated the school from
that day… I told my friend about what happened so I put my
feelings in the poem too ^_^ because her classmates where there
but they were glad that their stupid school gave them that
chance to show the country their talents



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Here is the poem
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A few days ago
I judged myself and so
I thought of writing this
Trying to fix my mess
Sorry for being rude
It was my childhood
But you can relax now
Cause I'm not anymore a cow'
That was only the beginning
So let me start talking


The relation of the friendship
Is really like the rosehip
Which looks really beautiful
And good for health and useful
But sometimes it becomes
Like powder of the guns
Which makes pain in heart
So try to be smart
To not get lose
Because it's the worst



The worst is to decide
Without using your mind
To say stupid things
And split with your friends
So don't waste you soul
By falling in a deep hole
My mind became clear
So please forgive me dear



Finally I want to write
My feeling after that night



School's girls are fools
They're used as tools
From this stupid school
The school is really cruel
Ieman high school is heck
That is what I think



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Ieman high school = my school's name
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Now I'm waiting for you do tell me what you think about my poem
^_^


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SenSei
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المكاويه
26-06-2007, 08:58 AM
looooooooooooooool
thanks for the poem
nice one sister
but i dont think friends are always real friends
most of the time,, they are hypocrites
thanks

A.N.G.E.L
26-06-2007, 09:47 AM
nice one...... it is relly good poem
and we witing for another one
thanxs sis..and i wish you all the best

sensei
26-06-2007, 12:30 PM
looooooooooooooool
thanks for the poem
nice one sister
but i dont think friends are always real friends
most of the time,, they are hypocrites
thanks

I think that too... but u said always and this friend not like the others
I have friend for 12 yeard and this one for 4 years and another for 5 years
these kind of friendship don't really break up easly
I love my friends
but that doesn't mean I've never break with my friends... I met lots of kinds of people... but now I can choose who is really can be friend
^________^
thanks for your replay




nice one...... it is relly good poem
and we witing for another one
thanxs sis..and i wish you all the best


thanks sis ^_____^ but it has been really long time since last poem
I'll try to write one soon

katsumi san
01-07-2007, 02:15 PM
The worst is to decide
Without using your mind


I like the poem
thank you so much dear sensei for sharing
it was nice from you to write this poem
to your friend

^^

sensei
01-07-2007, 06:37 PM
Oh thanks ^_^... and thank you for your reply
The best gift for your friends is your feeling tward them
nothing better than a poem to declare your feelings ^_^ that's what I think

lynda
01-07-2007, 07:18 PM
hi ... i really liked ur poem its so touchy

>> great job<<
keep it up

sensei
02-07-2007, 12:35 AM
thank lynda ^_^ I'm glad that you are here


its so touchy

;) I don't think that :ponder: but maybe you are sensetive
thanks again and see you in my other poems ^_^
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