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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : !!Wake up



sensei
12-06-2007, 02:45 PM
hiiiii everyone this is my poem which I put before in the photoshop forum
It's the best poem I ever wrote
I wrote it before one year and half for my friend Because she is always in bad mood
also she tried to kill herself with knife when she was a kid me too I tried to kill myself too << ;P I'm idiot
anyway everyone have problems but don't ever think to leave this world
?.....be patient ok
now read it ;D please
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g134/gambit-0_0/ft.gif
People think you are strong
But I'm sure they are wrong
I've never seen someone weaker than you
You can't win a fight against yourself too
So please try hard to wake
From this nightmare for my sake
Please don't say I can't change my life
And trying to leave this world with a knife
I'm sure you can change it if you want
But you think this is the end and you lost
In this place of darkness forever
And no one can help you ever
Now I'm here to wake you
From your nightmare and tell you
Something you didn't know it
Something you want to hear it
Come with me my other half
To start searching for the true life
You will know that I'm right
And you will know the meaning of the bright
The bright of this life
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g134/gambit-0_0/ft.gif
We are only friends but I called her my other half in the poem because she really looks like me in everything
she likes what I like
and do what I do
and have the same interestings ^_^
anyway... I need you opinions ^_^

and thanks

sensei

INFERNO
12-06-2007, 03:34 PM
wow very nice word

i really like it

specially at


I've never seen someone weaker than you
You can't win a fight against yourself too

but please next time make the word lilbit bigger

10x

MustafaMM
12-06-2007, 04:39 PM
Thank you so much for the hard work & keep it up
But please larger the font next time we barely can read it...

:: HiDEY ::
12-06-2007, 04:51 PM
Pardon me sweetie, I am going to have to enlarg the font size you used
: )

:: HiDEY ::
12-06-2007, 04:58 PM
Back after inlarging the font
: )
Very nice words .. They can be put together a little bit better though
I can sence what you meant by the poem
But, I can't understand why would both of you try to commit suicide
?

sensei
13-06-2007, 03:48 PM
wow very nice word


i really like it


specially at



اقتباس:
I've never seen someone weaker than you


اقتباس:
You can't win a fight against yourself too



but please next time make the word lilbit bigger


10x



I'm really sorry >.< I didn't mean to write it very small
but my handwriting is really small so I used to read stuff like that



Thank you so much for the hard work & keep it up




But please larger the font next time we barely can read it



I'm sorry >.< I'm really really sorry

I'll do my best next time... and wait for my poems



Pardon me sweetie, I am going to have to enlarg the font size you used







: )



thanx ^_^ sooo much




Very nice words .. They can be put together a little bit better though

I'll try to do better next time



I can sence what you meant by the poem
the poem is clear... I didn't mean anything exept what you read



But, I can't understand why would both of you try to commit suicide







?




I've been bullied by my all my sisters who older than me

I was only 8 when I tried to commit suicide... anyway
they feel gulty now ^_^ I forgave them all
it's not their problem anyway... they where teenagers
I don't know why do I like to talk in this??? maybe because I became stronger by being bullied more than 8 years
I'm glad about what happened in the past... thanks to allah then my sisteres I became stronger and don't care about what others think or say about me
but about my friend... I don't really know but it's family's problems too