My First Post and a Poem

[Gemonasai]

al salam 3lekom

how are you guys/girls

well this is a poem I came up with, it's nothing much. it's just a bunch of words rhyimg together. maybe I should just get into rap instead :biggthump





Light

I’ve lived in darkness, all my life
As if my only way, was to strife
Despair, Despair, has become my ground
Sadness, Sadness, has become my shroud
But when I Saw her, I saw light

Through the crowd, I’ve cut my way
The faces I saw, looked so gray
All I did, was try to sway
From absurdity to Sanity
But when I saw her, I saw light

Void and null, seemed my life
To live, to live, seemed so pointless
These dark thoughts, were my rife
I tried to fight them but, it was meanigless
But when I saw her, I saw light

White and black, became so mixed
On sorrow and grief , my mind was fixed
No matter how, I tried to stop
These dark thoughts, were on top
But when I saw her, I Saw light

Then on a Tuesday morning, I saw her
And then, all that I knew have changed
Into the dark corners of my soul, she turned the light
My little dark world, has changed, has changed!
And so when I saw her, I Saw light

[teefa]

Welcome at the English Forum and thanks for the nice poem
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[katsumi san]

و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله تعالى و بركاته

This poem is really nice
It has a special rhythm
&
The choice of the words is nice
These words can be considered as a song's lyrics
(A rap song as you said)
I really like it !!

Many thanks brother Gemonasai for sharing
and welcome to the English forum
We hope to see more of your Topics
Keep up
&
good luck
^^

[مستر حريقة]

:DI used to write poems
but not anymore

And that thread was just awesome brother

Keep your work up
Thank you

;)And welcome to the English Forum