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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Do You Dare ?



البركان الهائج
05-09-2007, 11:36 AM
hi every one, this is my first post in this section, and i wanted to make it special, so i am posting a poetry with the title ( Do You Dare ? )

How do even dare, talking about fare
seeking the one who's killing, in your house living
you stand and take a glance, without showing your true substance
crying or hiding tears, how ever there's no one to hear
Shout, and Share us your care
about wars, cores, nuclear shores
smoke, drug and even thug
leaving spaces between the words, fill them with your own words
after all we don't lie, words are cheep and no one to buy
thats how a human acts, and never realizes the facts
God sees the one who dares, as well as the one who stands and stares

katsumi san
05-09-2007, 02:30 PM
Thnaks for the poem
&
welcome brother
البركان الهائج
to the English forum
waiting for your news
^^

MustafaMM
05-09-2007, 03:47 PM
Salam & Hi Mutineer Volcano, MashAllah your English is good, & I liked your poem so much, Hope to see around more & More

البركان الهائج
05-09-2007, 07:59 PM
thank for your grate replays and i hope that you read my new poem about Lost soon ! :)

مستر حريقة
06-09-2007, 12:34 AM
Nice piece brother

;)Plus, you are so welcome to be between us
Wainting to see more from you

:)Good luck