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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Maybe Tomorrow



dream catcher
22-10-2007, 04:29 AM
Yet another well written but in the same
time simple poem
although it might seem like its lacking something you
can't really point out, it is beautifully performed by unknown artist for me
please, enjoy
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I've been down and
I'm wondering why
These little black clouds
Keep walking around
With me
With me

It wastes time
And I'd rather be high
Think I'll walk me outside
And buy a rainbow smile
But be free
They're all free

So maybe tomorrow
I'll find my way home
So maybe tomorrow
I'll find my way home

I look around at a beautiful life
Been the upper side of down
Been the inside of out
But we breathe
We breathe

I wanna breeze and an open mind
I wanna swim in the ocean
Wanna take my time for me
All me

So maybe tomorrow
I'll find my way home
So maybe tomorrow
I'll find my way home

aliveZombie
22-10-2007, 07:38 PM
hi Dream how are you?.. hope that you are doing fine
wow these poam is nice
I really hope to read more

Amal Sayed
23-10-2007, 03:59 PM
Asslam alikum
a great poem,what it's called?

I like it when poems aren't about love I mean I think it is a subject been talked about a lot.. well, sometiems they are good I mean the love poem,

metal Z
24-10-2007, 05:40 AM
wow

it realy is something

i like this part

I look around at a beautiful life
Been the upper side of down
Been the inside of out
But we breathe
We breathe

thanks bro it's realy great

keep up the good work

C ya