「メ Forgive me メ」

[Levana]

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「メ Forgive me メ」


under the palely stars


memories of the past comes to mind


reminding me of my everlasting pain


reminding me of a face i've struggled to forget


the truth comes crashing upon my weary soul


and tears flow down my face


while sorrows consume me


times have changed but my pain remains


what cruel fat is this


i close my eyes muttering tow words


... forgive me ...






..:: εїз ::..

[مستر حريقة]

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「メ Forgive me メ」

under the palely stars

memories of the past comes to mind

reminding me of my everlasting pain

reminding me of a face i've struggled to forget

the truth comes crashing upon my weary soul

and tears flow down my face

while sorrows consume me

times have changed but my pain remains

what cruel fat is this

i close my eyes muttering tow words

... forgive me ...






..:: εїз ::..



:09: First, I forgive you
:) This is great Levana.. I liked the these words
:ponder: I saved the picture you attached too

Second I noticed that the words colored with red should be changed to

Come
&
Two

Thank you Levana
.... Waiting for the next
:biggthump

[Iris]

nice Levana

がんばってください

..:: εїз ::.. ا <--- Like it

[مستر حريقة]

nice Levana

がんばってください

..:: εїз ::.. ا <--- Like it

? Whats with the " がんばってください " thing
:D

[Iris]

mean GoodLuck

..:: εїз ::..

[alamawi]

thanks Levana
that is a great poem

[Levana]

:09: First, I forgive you
:28: dont talk to me am still mad at you




:) This is great Levana.. I liked the these words
thanks tch aa7




:ponder: I saved the picture you attached too
:12: whaaaaay thats MY pic give it bake






Second I noticed that the words colored with red
should be changed to


Come
&
Two



:smile: sorry daddy i was kinda sleepy




Thank you Levana


:D your welcome tchchch aaa7




.... Waiting for the next
:biggthump


:أفكر: will see






..:: εїз ::..




nice Levana
thanx love am really glad to see you her




がんばってください
:D ありがとう



..:: εїз ::.. ا <--- Like it
:silly: me too




..:: εїз ::..





thanks Levana
that is a great poem


!! ur very much welcome

[مستر حريقة]

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[metal Z]

Hi Levana

very nice

you have talent girl

keep it up

and waiting for your new

see ya

[dream catcher]

Girl I totally forgive you..:D
all you've to do is, bring me a cupcake
:P

nice

[Levana]

Hi Levana



very nice


you have talent girl


keep it up


and waiting for your new


see ya



hi girl long time no see


thanx zee


umm.. i dont think so but thanx


i'll try


:ponder:we'll see about that


later







Girl I totally forgive you..:D




all you've to do is, bring me a cupcake
:P


nice



:( but i dont have a cupcake
:D tell you what i'll give you one of my precious lolipops



sweet
:lollypop:

[Amarantine]

Hey Levana

i think those Words are yours and although they're simple but they convey such a nice meanings and Feelings

Good Luck

Have Fun

[MiSs.ChiPs]

waaw livo you pretty good in writing



times have changed but my pain remains



I like this part
every body have silent pain
it's never mind what are these, but the matter how we deal whith it
cheeeer
good luck my dear