Hell School

[L.J]

hi every body
this is a poem i wrote before final exams and i put all the suffering and pressure on it
i hope you like it
it's a little bit long though

Hell school
Saturday, Sunday it’s all the same
Monday, Tuesday it’s just so lame
Wednesday I yelled it’s end of school
It’s time to play and act so cool
Thursday, study that all just sucks
It’s harder than paying dollars & bucks
I said to mama I hate the school
She said you’re funny & such a fool
Friday, I sleep at 10 pm
And wake at morning at 6 am
The teacher just says “Do & DO”
She said “You have a research too”
She says “No good go do it again”
And I’m so suffering in such a pain
It’s just so sad & not so fair
But all I do is wait & bear
I can’t believe it’s end of year
I made my mind so fresh & clear
Saturday, Sunday go have fun
Monday, Tuesday it’s all been done
Boys & Girls Let’s go out shout
Let’s all go running & go far out
Feeling happy full of proud
Let’s all say it out so loud
All we do just go & tell
We’re out of jail & out of hell

[فارس سحابة]

hahaahah >>> very funny!! but it's quite odd to feel full of proud at closure
well, the peom is nice and funny but the morals of it are far from being accepted>> no one should call the school as Hell !! someday you will figure out how important and critical the school is

thanks and keep on the track

[L.J]

تسلم يا فارس سحابة لكن لو كنت معاي في المدرسة حتكره عمرك يمكن أنا دحين أحس كده لكن لمن أتخرج يمكن أحس غير و أضحك على الأيام هادي

[أنــفــاسـ]

حلوه عجبتني كثير رغم اني ما عرفت بعض الكلمات ^^"

بس اكثر ما عجبني وحسيتة موزون :D <<<< حتى في الانقلش فيه وزن بعد :09:
I can’t believe it’s end of year
I made my mind so fresh & clear


بس اتوقع مكانها قسم اللغات اذا ماكنت غلطان :D

بالتوفيق

تحيااااااتي

[L.J]

آسفة على تأخير الرد لأني سافرت برة البلد و رجعت ده الاسبوع
.: شكرا على مرورك :.