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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : nice story



the rainbow
15-09-2008, 01:49 AM
i like stories and this one specialy i hope u like it

a long time ago,there was a huge apple tree,a little boy loved to come and play around it every day
he climbed to the tree top, and he took a nap under the shadow
he loved the tree and the tree loved to play with him
time went by...the little boy had grown up
and he no longer played around the tree every day
one day, the boy came back to the tree and he looked sad
come and play with me? the tree asked the boy
iam no longer a kid, i do not play around trees any more
the boy replied
i want toys, i need money to buy them
sorry, but i do not have money
but u can pick all my apples and sell them
so u wil have money

the boy was so exited
he grabbed all apples on the tree and left happily

the boy never came back after he picked the apples
the tree was sad

one day,the boy who now turned into a man returned

and the tree was exited, come and play with me, the tree said

i do not have time to play.i have to work for my family

we need a house for shelter, can u help me?

sorry
i do not have any house. but you can chop off my branches
to build your house

so the man cut all the branches of the tree and left happily

the tree was glad see him happy but the man never came back
since then

the tree was again alonely and sad

one hot summer day the man returned and the tree was delighted
come and play with me , the tree said

tting old. i want to go sailing to relax my self
can u give me a boat? said the man

use my trunk to build your boat
u can sail far away and be happy
so the man cut th tree trunk to make a boat
he went sailing and never showed up for a long time

finally, the man returned after meny years
sorry my boy.but i do not have anything for you anymore
no more apples for you,. the tree said

no problem, i do not have any teeth to bite. the man replied
no more trunk for you to climb on
iam too old for that now..the man said

i realy can not give youanything
the only thing left is my dying root
the tree said with tears

i do not need much now, just a place to rest
iam tired after all these years.. the man replied

good old tree roots are the best place to lean on and rest
come,come sit down with me and rest
the man set down and the tree was glad and smiled with tears

this is you and the tree is your parent

please enlighten all your friends and your familie
by telling them this story

love your parents

FREEDOM GIRL
23-09-2008, 07:26 AM
HYE GIRL :ILIKE THIS STORY VERY MUCH
THANKS SIS AND GOD BLESS U
YOUR FRIEND FREEDOM GIRL
:p

the rainbow
24-09-2008, 02:12 AM
thanx sis finally someone read my story realy thanx i hope u enjoy it its realy useful and enjoyble story thanx

blex0
24-09-2008, 12:22 PM
thanx sis finally someone read my story realy thanx i hope u enjoy it its realy useful and enjoyble story thanx


umm well u know y hon ... cuz it is too long :) thats it

i'll read it .. OKAY ?? i'll make time 4 it

KaKa LoVeR
25-09-2008, 12:36 AM
nice story
But
your grammer
needs work
if you need help
i will give it to you
bye

Mr. Redfield
25-09-2008, 05:51 AM
thank you sister

it's a real nice story....... thanks again

Duchess
28-09-2008, 04:53 PM
wow ... nice story

its full with emotions ^__^ its also meaningfull

i thought it was breathtaking

thank you for sharing the story

dear god bless our parents

take care hon :D

the rainbow
06-10-2008, 11:52 PM
thanx guysssssss and kaka lover ill be happy if u helped me on the grammars