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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : شعر Goodbye



L.J
23-04-2009, 11:17 AM
I know you guys might get bored of this but i can't feel good unless i write what i feel about MY SCHOOL so this is the last thing i've wrote..

GOODBYE

this school keeps getting on my nerve
I get my parents called for my shirt
everyone is trying to be such a nerd
I kept on calling but no one heard

listen to please
don't go following my lead
test and paper after paper
it keeps hurtin in my head
someone slap me, I am nappy
have heard what I said?

it took too long to tell myself
that this is bad for my heath
it follows me till I'm dead
but I'm holdin on to breath

listen to me please
don't go followin my lead
I said enough is enough
and now it's time for me to play
you can't shut me, you can't stop
you just can't get in my way

and I will show you I am strong
even if it takes too long
and I'll prove all of you wrong
and I'll sing my favourite song

hell school 1, and hell school 2------->i wrote it before just so you know
there's nothing left for me to do
it's holiday that's so cool
all I say is GOODBYE school



that's it I hope u Guys like it I'll wait for your comments

Para Noir
03-05-2009, 03:17 PM
isnt it more like a rap song? <_< its kinda "streaty" hehe

but good try :p u should sing it out maybe <_< good luck !

L.J
26-05-2009, 04:28 PM
I don't know if it's rap or not but these are the words that pops in my head DURING class
-thanks- I've been waiting for anyone to write

L.J
26-05-2009, 04:29 PM
there are few mistakes...
that this is bad for my health
but I'm holdin on to My breath