شعري أول مشاركة لي

[sweet ink]

من هواياتي اني اكتب اغاني الراب و اشعار باللغة الانجليزية
و ما لاحظت قسم للغة الانجليزية (ضعف نظر بعيد عنكم :blackeye:)
حبيت اشارك اشعاري معكم في هذا القسم
يا رب تعجبكم اول قصيدة . و اعطوني ارائكم :33:



i visited my brother in september
i didn't want to travel by train
so i bought a ticket at the airport
and made the journey by plane
i'd driven a car
but i hadn't driven far
i'd travelled on a train
for a thousand miles or more
i'd ridden a hourse
and a bicycle of course
but i'd never been in an aeroplane before
i was feeling a little nervous in the mornning
while i waited at the airport for the plane
but the flight was very comfortable
the sky was blue
and the sun was shining all the way.

[مجهول؟]

مــشــاركــة حلوة إن شاء الله دوم للأمام