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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : sacred tears, rest my love [sscp] :D



Erroneous
03-08-2009, 11:32 AM
i got carried away with the whole compatition idea ^.^
anyway it turned out 2 be somewhere between gothic and romance
guess i've been listening to 2much gothic-doom metal
anyway enjoy
and gd luck 2 everyone else :D




Sacred tears, rest my love





In madness lies the answer to sanity


Your blood dripping from my finger tips,


The dagger is still clogged in your throat


Yet you still struggle to breath


It's all over my love…


Suffer no more… just rest and let the angels carry you to a safe place


Away from this hell


I kneel closer to your body... for one last kiss...


Slowly rapping my hand around the dagger, pulling it away


You gasped your last breathe… with one tear drop down your cheek


Now you're just an empty shell…


Your eyes are frozen, their beautiful hazel color turning into a white icey blue


your body is as cold as your heart was… yet your lips are so … red


Bloody red, like the color of lipstick you always wanted…


You're so pale right now yet so beautiful…


I didn’t mean to murder you…in this dark , gloomy night… but I knew this was your only salvation


life has already killed you inside my love


……..





Remember...


The carving we had made on the oak tree… in the deep forests


They say that, that tree is the gateway between worlds, how ironic


Do you remember what we wrote….?


Yes… that’s right


* Sedric & Emily = together forever *


Just another cliché, but not to me…


I shall stay with you… forever


Holding your cold body tightly to my chest, keeping you warm


I will always protect you like I promised….


My love




t.c all :biggthump

dream catcher
04-08-2009, 06:16 AM
that was beautiful
in a gloomy kind of way :D

two things:

1 - its waaaaaaaay tooooooooooo short
2 - the ending left me with something to be desired
I felt like it was lacking something


write more stuff, longer stuff
I'll be happy to read :p

Erroneous
04-08-2009, 10:05 AM
hey D.C
always a delight cing u in my topics :D


that was beautiful
in a gloomy kind of way :D

awwwwwwww :) sanka u
u get a cookie :p



1 - its waaaaaaaay tooooooooooo short
lol if i wrote it too long no one would read
anyway my head went blank < < real reason :P XD
if i added anymore things 2 it, its just gonna be gross
coz i was thinking that the guy would drink 4rm her blood
3la asas 2 keep apart of her with him, didnt wanna freak anyone out so i kept it simple


the ending left me with something to be desired
I felt like it was lacking something
yeah i know i cut it short
something 2 be desired? like a twist of events or sumthing :P
ok here goes the girl becomes a vampire and kills her lover the end xD


write more stuff, longer stuff
I'll be happy to read
thats sweet of u :D
and im happy u stopped by :)
t.c

Mr.Rayan
12-08-2009, 11:38 AM
Hi Erroneous

It's short and delighting

good luck ..

o
^.....^

Erroneous
19-08-2009, 10:51 PM
hey ray ray !
u dont say much do u >_>
pokes ~~ stop being an emo
lool kidding :p
anyway thx 4 stoppin :D
t.c