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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Outta My Head



L.J
26-10-2009, 07:24 PM
Hi Everyone This is only half of the ryhm or song whatever you wanna call it
i'll write the second part later

Outta My Head

I lay Down just to think of u
I break out just to see u
now I can't bear to be with u you
you made my heart break in two

(you left drown in my tears)
(Feels Empty without u here)

Maybe someday you'll think of me
maybe someday you'll wish I was here
but it was u who disappeared
maybe that's how it should be

(u never came when I was Scared)
you Always knew but never cared)

And I ~ will never ever Cry
but why ~? do I Even try?
You're not worth every tear I've shed
get outta my life, outta my head




i need your opinions people pls don't be greedy
(my friend Zura is new here she writes arabic poems give her your opinins?)

ZURA
26-10-2009, 09:01 PM
Grate work lj i really like it

katsumi san
29-10-2009, 05:45 PM
u never came when I was Scared)
you Always knew but never cared)

I like this part
thanks L.J for sharing
waiting for the second part of the song
keep up & good luck
^^

SultanXp
30-10-2009, 11:50 AM
Maybe someday you'll think of me
maybe someday you'll wish I was here


nice, this words think future,
Thanks a lot, and Good luck

L.J
30-10-2009, 01:42 PM
THANKS GUYS