Cant Hold On Any Longer

Turn down the voices
Those whisoers inside my head
Turn down the lights
Just leave me alone, crying on my bed!
My pillow is wet by tears
Can't you see all my fears?!
I'm so down, I'm feeling weak
I need you near to talk & speak
deep down inside me, u've never reached
Why didn't you listen, why didn't you let me talk instead of weep?!
When i need you, why can't you be there?
Why can't you hold me close & say you care?
Just look in my eyes, can i hold on any more?
Life is so unfair, tomorow never unfolds what it's got in store!
just let me Cry, don't ask me why!
Let me weep, u've never reached me deep!
But plz don't go, this moment i need you so
Let me cry on your shoulder
Let my tears fall, can't hold them longer!
I need to feel your arm around me
I need you to surround me!
just don't leave me, hold me near
Wipe all my tears, you brush away all my fears
All i need is your love, your care
A life with you to share
All i need is you, You bring me all together
WE Are one, not two....All i need is You

hello there

lovely poem

كود:

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u've never reached me deep

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so good

PS:there some lines that are too long, it makes the sentence loose it meanings (my opinion of course)

best reagrds
the duke

My reply - no need for it
What you wrote is bigger than it
You have showed me the little
Of your creation that I don't have it

Accept it - my regards- truely
Cuz my reply is not enough, suddenly
But I'd better try to say Thank You
Since you have written beautifully

Hi there
i think its avery nice poem
beautiful writting

Hi dear

:06: where have u been
long time no see
the poem is an extermely interesting one
:biggthump very beautiful
:o what could i say
its really incredible
so sweet
:05: and the music is very cute
thank u so much for this poem
bless u
:ciao:

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the duke

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thank you for passing by

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Money Talks

Accept it - my regards- truely
Cuz my reply is not enough, suddenly
But I'd better try to say Thank You
Since you have written beautifully

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thx alot for your kindless

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i think its avery nice poem
beautiful writting

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hi dear my friend ... thank you very much

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المكاويه



Hi dear

:06: where have u been
long time no see
the poem is an extermely interesting one
:biggthump very beautiful
:o what could i say
its really incredible
so sweet
:05: and the music is very cute
thank u so much for this poem
bless u

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hi dear ... i'm alittel busy
thanks to you to passing by ... bless you too



with my love

Hi there

I liked your poem so much

i hope you'll keep writting so we can read beautiful things like this over and over again

bless u

salam :ciao:

Thank u so much sister

that was good
very good poem
:D i like it
c ya

Really Nice ^_^ ..

And I Hope He'll Be There For U ..