رد: Immortal In Death - Poem
Wow ... did you wrote all by yourself ? :D fantastic ,expecting more ... and .. ahh. can tech me some ? :09: .. see ya
رد: Immortal In Death - Poem
Saaalaaaaam
wounderfull words..and the imaging of the angels with awarness of being immortal of death..just shut me down.. and i stand with high and pride..this is a rare style..you have to go on.so we`ll be thursty of more words from you
and take care
c ya
رد: Immortal In Death - Poem
This is definitely one of
the best poems I've ever read
رد: Immortal In Death - Poem
this is a great poam that warns us of what might happen in the afterlife
great job :top:
رد: Immortal In Death - Poem
Hi guys n_n
Mr. Small:
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Wow ... did you wrote all by yourself ? fantastic ,expecting more ... and .. ahh. can tech me some ? .. see
I am glad you liked the poem, I wrote it myself and I was expecting for a better writing but as you can see I need to revise some of my grammars but what to do this is all I can come up at the moment, as for teaching I really don't know how to teach because I only select words and gather them in one sentence n_n
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Its realy nice topic..you have good style in writting
Thanks and waitiing more
Inshallah if there is any idea and time I will be writing but at the moment don't expect anything from a lazy guy like myself n_n
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Angel Tears:
Saaalaaaaam
wounderfull words..and the imaging of the angels with awarness of being immortal of death..just shut me down.. and i stand with high and pride..this is a rare style..you have to go on.so we`ll be thursty of more words from you
and take care
و عليكم السلام
I am glad you liked the poem n_n thanks alot for your supporting words I really appreciate it, I am hoping to be better in writing in English and inshallah I will improve my writing skills, thanks again Angel Tears for passing by and posting a comment...
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Lips Licker:
This is definitely one of
the best poems I've ever read
Now this is too much for me, if I have confiednce in myself I could convert your words into that of the supportings but I am still not there but Inshallah one day I will write better poems. Still your words makes me happy and gives me the courage to post more of these poems
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Toxic Rain:
this is a great poam that warns us of what might happen in the afterlife
great job
That was one of the main reason behind the poem, I must do better job in describing yet I am not that good but I will do it one day inshallah, thanks so much Rain and hope to see you again
See you later
رد: Immortal In Death - Poem
nice
what's great about it is that you chose an important topic to write about
really nice
hope to read more from you :biggthump
رد: Immortal In Death - Poem
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Toboe
nice
what's great about it is that you chose an important topic to write about
really nice
hope to read more from you :biggthump
Thanks brother, I am glad you like it, I will try to write more but as you know my speciality is not in this section but I am trying to visit different sections of the forums n_n anyway thanks for your comment and see you around...
رد: Immortal In Death - Poem
Assalamu 3alaikum..
MashaAllah ... Dare I speak ?
your rhyming is great .. the poem is so passionate and well written .. I applaud you !
رد: Immortal In Death - Poem
great poem..
i bet there s bright future waiting 4 u my friend^^
keep on the hard work..
c ya^^
