Something romantic that I wrote..Please come in

Salam & Hi Everyone

Well, I'm so sad because I got to leave you guys for awhile
Umm 20 days or so... I'm going out the country to get some medical treatments, So be sure to pray to Allah for me....

And yeah this's something "Stupid" That I wrote while saying good-bye to some really close friend of mine.. Hope I didn't make alot of mistskes, & it makes sence, Because I was for some reason so heart-broken, & wasn't able to concentrate well

Hope you tell me honestly what you think of it....

My soul went with hers flying
Looking for a place where we're alone
No one can bother us Or Hear us
Coz when she speaks ...My ears aren't mine
They're all hers & Not for anyone else
I tried to close my eyes before they burn
Because of her beauty
Oh my lord.. If she's a human then
How angels & Our women in heaven are gonne be
Oh my lord... You know how pure
& Innocent my love for her is.....
You know that than I or Her do...
I loved the night just because of it first letter
I loved staying at the night starring at moon
Because I always say while looking at it
Your face looks to me better than thounds of moons
I just want you to know that if there will be
no one left in the world loves you
Or understands I'll be always there for YOU.....
At night, I sit looking at the sky wishing
That one day..We sit together while holding hands...
But I always ask myself, Will my hands
Ever be so lucky to Touch yours??
& Will my ears Ever be so lucky to
Hear a word of love from someone like you??
I know it's just a far dream ....But hope it soon comes true
But when that time comes...Will a mermaid like you
Accept an ugly guy like me...Don't think so
But always tell myself keep dreaming on..
That's all you got to do...
Maybe you're wondering what happened
To my eyes after looking at hers....
Sorry when it comes to this I'm speechless
No language in the world can decribe what I saw
I saw something beyond the human's imagination
Sorry my love but I'm lost without you
Coz I'm motivated by you..& Losing U means
Losing the cause of my struggling & living on...
I know... you're bored reading these non-sence
I know... this is how it feels for you
Because so simply I'm living an
Unreciprocated love story..this's the reality..
That no one can do change it... but YOU....
I'll say it once & for all (I love you) But do YOU????
Yours forever...Mustafa

I know it sounds stupid but you got to excuse for my debute
Awaiting your sweet replies

Best Regards
Mustafa

MmMm

;) Why care dude, Nothing worth it

But its a good one, I admit that

and I noticed that

اقتباس:

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I loved the night just because of it first letter
I loved staying at the night starring at moon

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I think its her not it
Unless you meant something else

.....And

اقتباس:

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Your face looks to me better than thounds of moons
I just want you to know that if there will be

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:أفكر: ?Is it Thousands

Thank you for sharing Mustafa
And iam so sorry about what your treatment thing

?Do you want to say whats wrong

hi mustafa
i didnt know that you'r that romantic, will personally i liked it
i thought it was very sweet and i hope you get well soon
see ya

Nice words
thanks a lot brother mustafa
we hope you'll come back soon
في امان الله

my best friend mustafa , first i wish if you consider me as one of your most close friends, and i hope you comeback to us so soon very well.
and about your broken heart ... god really help you cause i passed with this situation before and only me can feel what's wrong with after allah
what you wrote is really nice
i 'd like to say that we are gonna miss you
and good bye

Dear Ahmad
It refers to the night even though I got what you mean
& thanks for being concerned


Dear Lynda
So glad that you feel about it ths way
& thanks for considering me a romantic individaul
"I'm honoured"

Dear Katsumi
Thanks for your sweet reply
Glad you like it

Dear Anasserge
You mustn't that doubt how precious you guys all are to me
& Yeah I consider a good buddy of mine


See you as soon a possible my dear friends

Mustafa

Asslam Alikum,
well, Mustafa I knew you were this romanctic.
I love your poem, I think the best comes when one in a strong emotion love, rag, sadness, pregnancy ..! although I loved it I wouldn't want to hear you talking like this.. really upset.. and hey cheer up Mustafa you still have all your friends here, right?

Fee Aman Allah,
I hope your treatment is going well.

Amal...Thank you so much for your kind words
And also thank you so much for having high hopes in me

Mustafa