o0$ Requiem for a Dream $0o

As I was cleaning up my PC last night..
I found something quite interesting..
a poet I, dream catcher, started to write a while ago..
but never get around to finish it, so it ended up in my to be finished folder..
dunno what the idea was or whats with the title, but as the date suggests..I wrote it in not-so-pleasant-times
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..I don't write but I do read lot...
so this is my first time, its kinda short because it was supposed to be "FINISHED"..anyway, read it and start sh00ting!!




Beneath the window


On a small bed


In a darkened room


Laid a kid

Staring at the glowing moon


Thinking


Of what might he be


In a future


He can not now see


With a smile


He rolled in his bed and faced the wall


Dreaming


Though he might be so young and small


Of better days


In a better place


Full of hopes


Full of dreams


He closed his eyes


And he slept in peace

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Start shooting.

I pictured every line I read, ...with Gary Jules's mad world in the background

it's sweet, ..a little blue, and a good poem overall
nice start


=) you should write more
.foXy

and he sterts to dream ... and his is ( dream catcher).:)r
nice sleep story .. sorry ... i mean poem
also i like ( read it and start sh00ting ).r

Foxy.

You even listen to Gary Jule's Mad World !
!you know what girl..I don't think you'll ever stop amazing me!!
!much respect!
about the poem being blue..like I said, I wrote it in not so pleasant times!t
hanks for the sweet complements and the sweet presence !!

anasserge

I didn't quite get what you said !!
but thanks for passing by anyway

><" for a second there i thought you were talking about me
and for someone who doesn't write that was really good, i liked it
i also agree with foxy you should write more

Levana

Welcome to my topic..
and who knows, maybe I was talking about you...! (&)
my problem is, I don't care much about writing..I take no pleasure in it!!
so, its rather pointless doing something you don't like..
but again, who knows...? I'm an impulsive guy
maybe I'll write something just for the heck of it
!!

would love to see you around..
post something
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة dream catcher

As I was cleaning up my PC last night..

I found something quite interesting..
a poet I, dream catcher, started to write a while ago..
but never get around to finish it, so it ended up in my to be finished folder..

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!! Ohh I hate that folder like HELL
When I tend to open it and try to finish some work in it
I just forget what was this work all about
:blackeye:

Anyway... I agree with the others
You're great dude....Keep on writing
;)
:) This is nice, thank you

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة dream catcher

would love to see you around..
post something
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:)
you just made my day, ^^ hopefully i'll post something soon

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W0o0o0ow
i like reading poems(: thanks dude however you should keep writing
if you have such a talent
you might be a writer someday!
Who knows!
also you can improve your writing but as i noticed: you don't like writing that much
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good luck

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Gracias...Mucha gracias
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