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Hi
how r u
I wrote some thing new
Its not much
hope you read it ^_^
Your love ... Is what makes me wake up every day
Your voice ... makes me feel not alone
Your laugh ... makes all the pain goes away
Your unger ... makes me feel closer
Your jokes ... makes me feel happy all days
Your words ... makes me stronger to face all the bad
days
hope you all like it
Hi
Hey there :Dx
how r u
i'm fine, you..?! x
I wrote some thing new
Its not much
hope you read it ^_^
Nice!.. i really liked it one thing though
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Your laugh ... makes all the pain goes away
Dont know whay but i think it should be go not goes, i'm not sure but i think so .. x
thanx
hope you liked it
and may be you're right
hey
im good how are you
^_^
i like you pure imotions its sweet
but try to use new words to you ..
like when you said
Your laugh ... makes all the pain go away
you could write ...
your laugh ... makes my pain fade
i used the word fade insead
and here you are talking about yourself not all the pain in the world
am i right
^_^
still i love it. keep up the good work
Thanx
I will try to use those words
but
I hope you liked it ^_^