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    الموضوع: The Day She Slept Away

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      The Day She Slept Away



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      بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم ..
      i wrote this when my sis died two months ago ..


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      I Woke Up Today
      I Feel Sad , I Don't Know Why
      It Was 3 AM
      I Looked Again
      Yes , It's 3 AM
      It's Early To Woke , I Slipped Into My Bed
      Trying To Get Some Peaceful Sleep
      I Couldn't
      I Just Couldn't
      I'm Feeling That I Lost Something
      Something
      Not Anything
      I Took A Quick Look In The Room
      Nothing's Really Missing
      My I-Pod On The Shelf
      My Clothes Throwed On The Ground
      Everything In It's Place
      But Wait ..
      There Is Something Missing ..
      I Looked In My Sister Bed
      She Wasn't There
      Where Did She Go At This Time !?
      Ow .. She's So Frustrating ..
      She Knows That I'm Afraid Of The Dark
      I Was Too Afraid To Look For Her
      It Was Dark ..
      And I'm Afraid Of The Dark
      But
      The Door Is Closed Tightly ..
      If She Closed It I Would've Heard It ..
      Well Let's Say I Was In Deep Sleep
      May Be The Snoring Was Loud For Not Hearing The Sound Of The Door ?
      Well .. Everything's Possible ..
      " Lindsay .. Lindsay .. Where Are You .. ? "
      " Lindsay , Please I'm Scaaaared "
      Huumphhhh
      She Likes To Do This To Me
      " Ok Fine , Don't Need Your Help "
      I Quickly Jumped Off My Bed And Opened the Lights ..
      Oww .. Now I Feel Good ..
      I Washed My Face ..
      " Where Is My Towel ? "
      I Stepped Into My Room To Take It ..
      But Wait A Sec ..
      Her Bed Hasn't Be Touched ..
      WHAT THE ..........
      Then I Remembered That She's Not Here ..
      I Remembered What Happened Last Day
      Now I Remeber Everything ..
      I Remembered That She's Slipped Away ..
      I Cryed A Little More ..
      Got Into My Bed ..
      And Have A Long Sleep ..
      It's A Night I Won't Forgot ..
      The Night My Soulmate Slipped Away ..
      The Night That She Slept Away ..
      Away From Me ..
      Now She's Gone ..
      And I'm Moving On ..

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      أي قسوة ٍ إعترتني لأنتهك عرض حروفي ؟!

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      كلما زادت معرفتي بأفعال الناس ، زاد تقديري للكلاب ..
      واللي على راسه بطحة يحسس عليها

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      Thank you miss evants for this poetry it's realy sad
      i think i feel like you felt two months age because my uncle died yesterday
      thank you and الله يرحمها

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      oh sorry i forgot can say what i-pod mean

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      Hello Mr ,
      It's So Sad To Lost Someone Close To You ..
      But She's In God Hand So There Is No Worry About Her ..
      About The I-Pod , Search In Google Images And Type : I-Pod ,,
      It's An MP3 Player , Advanced One ..

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      أي قسوة ٍ إعترتني لأنتهك عرض حروفي ؟!

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      كلما زادت معرفتي بأفعال الناس ، زاد تقديري للكلاب ..
      واللي على راسه بطحة يحسس عليها

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      thank you very much and i wish to meet you in another thread
      and bye

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      oooh god when i read this poetry i thought it's only a poetry

      then i realized it's a real story poetry

      i'm sorry .. my condolences to you

      you need only faith in those sitiuations and i believe you have it !




      " السينما الاوروبية فن قلباً وقالباً "

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      -_- sorry about ur sister
      I hope she is in a better place now

      about ur poem well it was good -^^- nice vocabs

      try to write more dear -^^-

      The purpose is not to run away
      .It's to chase after dremas
      .Like a ship going against the curren flow
      Even if it cuts through the rain and clouds
      .The wet roads shine

      ,Only the dark will teach
      .A stronger and stronger light
      [ Only Human ]

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      sorry abuot ur sister we hope she is now at the best place
      what u need that stronger faith
      and my deep condelences to you

      and thanks for the nice poem

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      Sorry for your sister
      I hope that made your belief stronger
      اشتقت إليكم..اشتقت لكل من عرفته في هذا المنتدى
      قضينا وقتا جميلا لن انساه ابدا..كم اتمنى ان يعود
      كم اتمنى ان نلتقي مجددا
      ابعدتني الظروف..وليتها تبتعد
      دعواتكم لي يا أحبتي..







      الله لا يحرمنا من إبداعاتك يا حسن

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