to a special person

[KaKa LoVeR]

Hi
how r u
I wrote some thing new
Its not much
hope you read it ^_^


Your love ... Is what makes me wake up every day
Your voice ... makes me feel not alone
Your laugh ... makes all the pain goes away
Your unger ... makes me feel closer
Your jokes ... makes me feel happy all days
Your words ... makes me stronger to face all the bad
days



hope you all like it

[Levana]

Hi
Hey there x

how r u
i'm fine, you..?! x

I wrote some thing new
Its not much
hope you read it ^_^

Nice!.. i really liked it one thing though

Your laugh ... makes all the pain goes away

Dont know whay but i think it should be go not goes, i'm not sure but i think so .. x

[KaKa LoVeR]

thanx
hope you liked it
and may be you're right

[metal Z]

hey
im good how are you
^_^

i like you pure imotions its sweet

but try to use new words to you ..
like when you said

Your laugh ... makes all the pain go away

you could write ...
your laugh ... makes my pain fade
i used the word fade insead
and here you are talking about yourself not all the pain in the world
am i right
^_^

still i love it. keep up the good work

[KaKa LoVeR]

Thanx
I will try to use those words
but
I hope you liked it ^_^