HAIL
thank you for the good mark
i hope to get again

I hope you get the full mark
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1-My criterion in the life, actions speak more than words.
Correct +1
2-Ali ia a critic.He always knows my faults.
Correct +1
It's better to say NOTICES instead of KNOWS because everyone can know your faults but only critics notice them, but your is correct
3-this an apple is edible for eating, but don't forget to clean it.
Without AN because you already used THIS
Correct +1
4-Lmia is too egocentric. She dosn't love even her mother.
Correct +1
5- I like felicity stories, because I am very sensitive boy.
You used felicity here as an adjective, it's a noun, the adjective is filicitous - 1/4
You could say for example:
I love stories filled with felicity
or
I love felicitous stories
Got it?
At the beginning of this topic you can check the differences between parts of speech in my 4rth reply on this thread
Total = 4.75
Great Job Masha'Allah
Keep it up
NaughtY AngeL, tnank you for the great effort.
It's nothing really
Ciao for now