Firstly .. i
d like u to accept my apologies for not posting a reply to ur awesome gallery before ..
secondly .. i must admit u have improved alot since ur first drawing .. and thats good ..
the artworks posted from the third page onward are really cool .. specially the thir one in the third page . her hair is really nice .. so are the eyes and her skin shadings ..
on the fourth page, the girl standing infront of a balcony looks awesome .. the BG is Superb .. i loved the way the clouds and the sun rays turned out .. not to forget the windows and its frames ..
the last artwork is cool too in both idea and CGing .. its probably the most beautiful piece of this gallery .. its Master Piece
^_^
from now on .. if u r not a critiq lover then i'd strongly recomend u dont read further than this ..
i dont have much to say but there are points that rose to mind when i saw the artworks on the fourth page ..
the girl infront of the balcony .. she looks good .. but there are some minor mistakes that could have been avoided easily .. her eyes are close .. unless this is ur style, keeping a distance of one'n a half eye between the eyes will make them look more appealing ..
her ears are small compared the the size of the head .. usually , in drawing the anime style , the ear extends from the eye to the tip of the nose length wise .. .. this way .. the proportions will be kept ..
the gul's neck is way to long ..
her apron folds seems as if they were pulled upwards while they are supposed to be flowing down due to the G-Force .. Right? ..
one more thing .. if the sun rays **representing the source of light** is from behind the girl, then shading the front part of the girl's body will look more suitable..
other than this, u did a great job at coloring the hair .. grey hairs are my personal favourite ^^ .. the dress is really awesome too .. so is her skin tones .. but the BG is the most remarkable work ..
Good job Digi Master .. hope my crit. isnt that philosophical .. and im sorry if im too frank or harsh .. but this is for ur good .. u r a quick learner .. this is an advantage for u .. i know a talent when i see one..and u have the skills ..
as for the last work .. its amazing .. astonishing and superb ..no flattery .. but i really liked this one .. the sky castle .. oh ma gad ..
!! its just sooo damn dreamy .. and the sky is awesome too ..
the only wrong thing i see is the boys shoulders ..keep up the great work Digi Master .. ^_^8
and once again .. sorry for not being in here before;_;
hope to see u soon with newer works, Best
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