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    الموضوع: Forgive me my friend

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      الصورة الرمزية sensei
      sensei غير متصل فارسة الرسم
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      Forgive me my friend


      Hi everyone… this is a new poem from me


      I wrote this to my friend who was a friend for 5 years and I
      had never given her a gift… so I wrote this poem and buy her a
      ^_^gift and put it in her locker at school


      She was really happy and in the break she gave me a big deep
      hug thanking me… I like here although I was very rude and cruel
      with here in the past


      So I wrote this poem to her to forgive me…


      Also… in the end I wrote my feeling toward our school… coz one
      night they asked the talented girls to go with them somewhere
      and they lied at us… they said there will be no guys only girls but
      they lied… I went back home angrily and I hated the school from
      that day… I told my friend about what happened so I put my
      feelings in the poem too ^_^ because her classmates where there
      but they were glad that their stupid school gave them that
      chance to show the country their talents



      Here is the poem


      A few days ago
      I judged myself and so
      I thought of writing this
      Trying to fix my mess
      Sorry for being rude
      It was my childhood
      But you can relax now
      Cause I'm not anymore a cow'
      That was only the beginning
      So let me start talking

      The relation of the friendship
      Is really like the rosehip
      Which looks really beautiful
      And good for health and useful
      But sometimes it becomes
      Like powder of the guns
      Which makes pain in heart
      So try to be smart
      To not get lose
      Because it's the worst


      The worst is to decide
      Without using your mind
      To say stupid things
      And split with your friends
      So don't waste you soul
      By falling in a deep hole
      My mind became clear
      So please forgive me dear


      Finally I want to write
      My feeling after that night


      School's girls are fools
      They're used as tools
      From this stupid school
      The school is really cruel
      Ieman high school is heck
      That is what I think



      Ieman high school = my school's name

      Now I'm waiting for you do tell me what you think about my poem
      ^_^


      SenSei
      التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة sensei ; 12-06-2007 الساعة 02:37 PM

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      looooooooooooooool
      thanks for the poem
      nice one sister
      but i dont think friends are always real friends
      most of the time,, they are hypocrites
      thanks
      سبحان الله و الحمد لله و لا اله الا الله و الله أكبر
      لا اله الا انت سبحانك اني كنت من الظالمين

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      nice one...... it is relly good poem
      and we witing for another one
      thanxs sis..and i wish you all the best

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      الصورة الرمزية sensei
      sensei غير متصل فارسة الرسم
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      looooooooooooooool
      thanks for the poem
      nice one sister
      but i dont think friends are always real friends
      most of the time,, they are hypocrites
      thanks
      I think that too... but u said always and this friend not like the others
      I have friend for 12 yeard and this one for 4 years and another for 5 years
      these kind of friendship don't really break up easly
      I love my friends
      but that doesn't mean I've never break with my friends... I met lots of kinds of people... but now I can choose who is really can be friend
      ^________^
      thanks for your replay

      nice one...... it is relly good poem
      and we witing for another one
      thanxs sis..and i wish you all the best
      thanks sis ^_____^ but it has been really long time since last poem
      I'll try to write one soon


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      The worst is to decide
      Without using your mind


      I like the poem
      thank you so much dear sensei for sharing
      it was nice from you to write this poem
      to your friend

      ^^
      سبحان الله وبحمده .. سبحان الله العظيم

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      الصورة الرمزية sensei
      sensei غير متصل فارسة الرسم
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      Oh thanks ^_^... and thank you for your reply
      The best gift for your friends is your feeling tward them
      nothing better than a poem to declare your feelings ^_^ that's what I think

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      hi ... i really liked ur poem its so touchy

      >> great job<<
      keep it up

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      الصورة الرمزية sensei
      sensei غير متصل فارسة الرسم
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      thank lynda ^_^ I'm glad that you are here
      its so touchy
      I don't think that but maybe you are sensetive
      thanks again and see you in my other poems ^_^
      the links in my signature

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