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  1. #1
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    first postin: poem

    tell me what u think
    Hells


    When you live in this planet with people around

    When you feel that life is just going in rounds

    And when you notice how inferior you may be

    You'll find out that you are the king under-ground



    You wake up every morning with the sunrise

    You live your moments with lots of lies

    And you wait till the end of the day

    To notice that your soul is never wise



    You live your routine just with empty souls

    You live with your soul without a precious goal

    And you know that nothing in your life time

    Will ever be your friendly joyful doll



    You go to the street and you meet old friends

    You draw your face with a smile you don’t understand

    And you get flattered by everyone you meet

    Yet you wonder when the day will ever end



    You look up to the faraway blue sky

    You see that life is just going wild

    And when you look to the ocean

    The only thing you'll see is my empty life



    I had enough from everyone

    I hate when I used to run

    And I hate when I hide

    Because my hell is done

  2. #2
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    24-01-2004
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    مشاركة: first postin: poem

    tell me what u think

    Hells


    When you live in this planet with people around

    When you feel that life is just going in rounds

    And when you notice how inferior you may be

    You'll find out that you are the king under-ground



    You wake up every morning with the sunrise

    You live your moments with lots of lies

    And you wait till the end of the day

    To notice that your soul is never wise



    You live your routine just with empty souls

    You live with your soul without a precious goal

    And you know that nothing in your life time

    Will ever be your friendly joyful doll



    You go to the street and you meet old friends

    You draw your face with a smile you don’t understand

    And you get flattered by everyone you meet

    Yet you wonder when the day will ever end



    You look up to the faraway blue sky

    You see that life is just going wild

    And when you look to the ocean

    The only thing you'll see is my empty life



    I had enough from everyone

    I hate when I used to run

    And I hate when I hide

    Because my hell is done


    be patient friend

    may be ur hell is better than mine

    so don't think that u r alone with pains

    .................

    great poem ....

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    26-01-2005
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    ؛؛ .. فلســ(غزة)ــطين .. ؛؛
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    Wink مشاركة: first postin: poem

    Wut a wonderful poem

    come on just get a grip

    everyone has pains so..... just be as patient as u could


    thanks dear and keep it up

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    مشاركة: first postin: poem

    10k u another one" and "نكاش روس" for ur comments
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    Life isn't about how many breath you take, it's about how many times it takes your
    breath away



    Life is about being sad in most of the times so that we can value the moments when being glad

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