Darkness & lightness

[Settlers 5]

i wrote a poem 4 u in a couple of day's here it is



in the darknes i see

in my dream

some lightness

and some steam


i'v became afread

from this darkness

nobody tell wut to do

the sultion is go to the lightness



i didn't go to the sultion

so the darkness is inside of me

and i have some voilence

but i heard some noise inside of me



i see light in my path

asKing me to play

and some one asKing me to stay

idid lsn to the path

and some one is saying hey wake up

so i woke up and i drink some of 7up

and the dream stoped and i see some of our gass

Now it was the end of class


hope u like it

[المكاويه]

nice one brother

....about the darkness coming from inside
i agree
its not around us
its inside us
everyone can change the darkness into light by changing the inside
...hopeful thinking
.......useful reading
and
shining writing
just try to change urself
and everything would change as a result

thank u for the poem
and the idea itself
*****
:a comment
try to focus on the grammar and spelling
in order to have a perfect poem
bless u

[مستر حريقة]

thanks bro very good

keep it up

best wishes