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[الماطري]

السلام عليكم شاب
I am a new participant and I want your helping if you please.
My question:
How can we use the following word:
THEREFORE , AS A RESULT, Because of this/that, In other words
if anyone have any idea about them send me as quickly as he can and with supporting some examples.
thank you very much for your helping

[حمودة فتحي]

عندي خطاب عن مارتن لوثر وفي اسئلة بعديه.................
الخطاب"""""""""""
والاسئلة في الاخر...................

I am happy to join with you today in what will go down in history as the greatest demonstration for freedom in the history of our nation.
Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation. This momentous decree came as a great beacon light of hope to millions of Negro slaves who had been seared in the flames of withering injustice. It came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of their captivity.
But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination. One hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity. One hundred years later, the Negro is still languished in the corners of American society and finds himself an exile in his own land. And so we've come here today to dramatize a shameful condition.
In a sense we've come to our nation's capital to cash a check. When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, they were signing a promissory note to which every American was to fall heir. This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, would be guaranteed the "unalienable Rights" of "Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness." It is obvious today that America has defaulted on this promissory note, insofar as her citizens of color are concerned. Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come back marked "insufficient funds."
But we refuse to believe that the bank of justice is bankrupt. We refuse to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation. And so, we've come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches of freedom and the security of justice.
We have also come to this hallowed spot to remind America of the fierce urgency of Now. This is no time to engage in the luxury of cooling off or to take the tranquilizing drug of gradualism. Now is the time to make real the promises of democracy. Now is the time to rise from the dark and desolate valley of segregation to the sunlit path of racial justice. Now is the time to lift our nation from the quicksands of racial injustice to the solid rock of brotherhood. Now is the time to make justice a reality for all of God's children.
It would be fatal for the nation to overlook the urgency of the moment. This sweltering summer of the Negro's legitimate discontent will not pass until there is an invigorating autumn of freedom and equality. Nineteen sixty-three is not an end, but a beginning. And those who hope that the Negro needed to blow off steam and will now be content will have a rude awakening if the nation returns to business as usual. And there will be neither rest nor tranquility in America until the Negro is granted his citizenship rights. The whirlwinds of revolt will continue to shake the foundations of our nation until the bright day of justice emerges.
But there is something that I must say to my people, who stand on the warm threshold which leads into the palace of justice: In the process of gaining our rightful place, we must not be guilty of wrongful deeds. Let us not seek to satisfy our thirst for freedom by drinking from the cup of bitterness and hatred. We must forever conduct our struggle on the high plane of dignity and discipline. We must not allow our creative protest to degenerate into physical violence. Again and again, we must rise to the majestic heights of meeting physical force with soul force.
The marvelous new militancy which has engulfed the Negro community must not lead us to a distrust of all white people, for many of our white brothers, as evidenced by their presence here today, have come to realize that their destiny is tied up with our destiny. And they have come to realize that their freedom is inextricably bound to our freedom.
We cannot walk alone.
And as we walk, we must make the pledge that we shall always march ahead.
We cannot turn back.
There are those who are asking the devotees of civil rights, "When will you be satisfied?" We can never be satisfied as long as the Negro is the victim of the unspeakable horrors of police brutality. We can never be satisfied as long as our bodies, heavy with the fatigue of travel, cannot gain lodging in the motels of the highways and the hotels of the cities. We cannot be satisfied as long as the negro's basic mobility is from a smaller ghetto to a larger one. We can never be satisfied as long as our children are stripped of their self-hood and robbed of their dignity by signs stating: "For Whites Only." We cannot be satisfied as long as a Negro in Mississippi cannot vote and a Negro in New York believes he has nothing for which to vote. No, no, we are not satisfied, and we will not be satisfied until "justice rolls down like waters, and righteousness like a mighty stream."¹
I am not unmindful that some of you have come here out of great trials and tribulations. Some of you have come fresh from narrow jail cells. And some of you have come from areas where your quest -- quest for freedom left you battered by the storms of persecution and staggered by the winds of police brutality. You have been the veterans of creative suffering. Continue to work with the faith that unearned suffering is redemptive. Go back to Mississippi, go back to Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana, go back to the slums and ghettos of our northern cities, knowing that somehow this situation can and will be changed.
Let us not wallow in the valley of despair, I say to you today, my friends.
And so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream. It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream.
I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: "We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal."
I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.
I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day, down in Alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of "interposition" and "nullification" -- one day right there in Alabama little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day every valley shall be exalted, and every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plain, and the crooked places will be made straight; "and the glory of the Lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together."2
This is our hope, and this is the faith that I go back to the South with.
With this faith, we will be able to hew out of the mountain of despair a stone of hope. With this faith, we will be able to transform the jangling discords of our nation into a beautiful symphony of brotherhood. With this faith, we will be able to work together, to pray together, to struggle together, to go to jail together, to stand up for freedom together, knowing that we will be free one day.
And this will be the day -- this will be the day when all of God's children will be able to sing with new meaning:

My country 'tis of thee, sweet land of liberty, of thee I sing.
Land where my fathers died, land of the Pilgrim's pride,
From every mountainside, let freedom ring!

And if America is to be a great nation, this must become true.
And so let freedom ring from the prodigious hilltops of New Hampshire.

Let freedom ring from the mighty mountains of New York.
Let freedom ring from the heightening Alleghenies of Pennsylvania.
Let freedom ring from the snow-capped Rockies of Colorado.
Let freedom ring from the curvaceous slopes of California.

But not only that:

Let freedom ring from Stone Mountain of Georgia.
Let freedom ring from Lookout Mountain of Tennessee.
Let freedom ring from every hill and molehill of Mississippi.
From every mountainside, let freedom ring.

And when this happens, when we allow freedom ring, when we let it ring from every village and every hamlet, from every state and every city, we will be able to speed up that day when all of God's children, black men and white men, Jews and Gentiles, Protestants and Catholics, will be able to join hands and sing in the words of the old Negro spiritual:
Free at last! Free at last!

السؤالا الاول: تحديد الغرض من الخطاب
السؤال الثانياسم المجموعة الثقافية
السؤال الثالث: اسم المجموعة الثقافية الي سادت في وقت الخطاب.
السؤال الرابع: :

talk abaut

* عرض اللغة
* الاستعارة.
التكرار.
-- تأثير جمل قصيرة.
لغة انفعالية
تأثير جمل قصيرة.

انا كتبت الاسئلة باعربي عشان ما اصعب الموضوع عليكم
الرجاء المساعدة............................

[Levana]

1-meet a new person

Hello, I'm Nora -
Hello, I'm Fahad, How do you do ? o -
? I'm fine thank you, and you -
I'm doing well, thank you, are you new here ? o -
yes, I just moved in here -
well I hope you like it -

\2-first day in a school

Excuse me -
yes? o -
This is my first day in school and I can't find my class can you help me pleas ?
yes, of course, what class are you in
I'm in 10A -
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Hope it helped

[نيو هنا]

أخواني الأعزاء أنا ضعيف في الريتنج بس حاولت أكتب مقالتين .. أتمنى تعطوني الخطأ والعيوب والنواقص التي بهن .. كما اتمنى تنصحوني بكل ما هو يفيدني ..


المقالة الأولى

The accident in the world will be more day by day. the statistic show to us the number of death about the accident when you see to this statistic we notice the different between the number of death each year. And causes of accidents do not fall from vacuum but from reasons . But let us said what are the reasons for this accident . this accident from the bad rods or from the person itself or from what ? . I can divide the reason of accident into three reason : the speed , the mobile phone ,and ignoring the signal.
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The speed in the roads is a big reason of accident . If you speed more than the speed which given us we causes most of accident because we cant avoid the others. Also we can make death to others and to our self . We see more of people like the speed in rods and they like movement between others duo to the movement we make a big accident . why we don't drive slowly why we make the death to others and we know the life hymen are very expensive . So we must carry when drive . As a result of that we can avoid the accident .
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Mobile phone is anther reason of accident. Due to mobile , we can causes the accident . Because mobile phone are making us busy in the road .As we know use mobile when we driving that contrary. But we see most of people using mobile phone when they driving . we using mobile to call or to write massage as a result of that they do not focus on the street . Statistics have confirmed to us the mobile a big reason to make accident on street . The accident not located on the user's mobile phone only, but may make to others a big problems .
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Ignoring the signal is third reason of accident . As a result of the Ignoring the signal, we cause of many accidents when ignoring the signal. Most of people don't carrying about the signal on street a result to that they can make a big accident on street . Because they do
mistake . The signal avoided us from the accident
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In conclusion , we must consider in our mind about this reason of accident because this reasons make a big accidents ii our life . Why we don't avoided them ? . why we don't carry about other ? we must think the accident

[نيو هنا]

الثانية

The Pollution is a big problem face the hymen life . It can more than causes and effects in our life . all of us knowing the effects of pollution . If we don't carrying about it that consider a big dangerous to us . In addition the pollution is reason of death of plant and tress . The statistic show to us the dangerous of pollution if we don't carrying about it . All the world are trying reduce the pollution and trying to know the cusses of the pollution then find the solutions . there are several effects of pollution like It's effect of Ozone e Layer , It's effect of the environment, and it's effect of the sea .

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The firs effect of pollution is effect of Ozone Layer . Ozone Layer is very important for hymen life . But they are still in danger because the air of pollution still attack it . When the air of pollutions goes up to the ozone layer slowly it eats it and make inside it a big hole , Due to the hole make a big dangers for us . As a result of the pollution , Global Warming will be more . When composing a black cloud will make risk of breathing . Eating of Ozen layer Easy entry of diseases to the human body . Due to the effect of ozone , causes most of the diseases and causing the death of animals and plants .

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Effect of the environment is anther effect of pollution . As a result of the effect of the environment , It cusses a lot of
diseases in human body and cause killing of most of the trees and animals because it reduces the function of the immune system of creatures . As a consequence of the effect of the environment , It can destroying the life . In addition , effect of the environment cusses skin diseases because it moves during the breathing of pollutants into the body.


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Effect of the sea is third effect of pollution . It make black cloud in the sea due to that, it make poison into fish and marine animals so the fish and marine animals will dead . Perform Effect of the sea Impact on human and animal .
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I conclusion, the effect of pollution become dangerous in our life . It also consider a big problem in hymen life . We must keep all this effect, effect of Ozone e Layer , effect of the environment, and effect of the sea in our mind and we must find the solutions for it .

[katsumi san]

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله تعالى و بركاته

Your writing is pretty good
it's true that it needs some improvement
but all you need to do is to write as much as possible,
In addition to that you must read and even learn some expression
you may find intersting

I'll try to give you my opinion about a part from your first writing
I will write my correction in GREEN
and I will write the comments in RED
^^

المقالة الأولى

The accident in the world will be more day by day.
The accidents in the world are increasing day after day

the statistic show to us the number of death about the accident when you see to this statistic we notice the different between the number of deaths each year.
The statistics show us .. of deaths due to accidents. When you see these statistics you notice the ....
you should learn and try to write short sentences
pay attention to the ''s'' at the end of plural nouns

And causes of accidents do not fall from vacuum but from reasons .
This is arabic & not english

When you write, try to think in english not in arabic

But let us said what are the reasons for this accident .
let us say which are these reasons

this accident from the bad rods or from the person itself or from what ? . I can divide the reasons of accidents into three reason : the speed , the mobile phone ,and ignoring the signal.
The roads bad conditions



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For the other part try to correct it your self
Try to find some links about accidents & pollution
In google or encarta
http://encarta.msn.com/artcenter_/browse.html
try reading some scientific magazines

keep up and good luck
^^

[نيو هنا]

هــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــلا

هذه مقطع بالانجليزي مدته دقيقتين

لو تكرمتم طالب منكم تحويل المقطع الصوتي الى نص يعني اريده على شكل نص انجليزي


من يساعدني
لسماع المقطع

http://www.4shared.com/file/15008666...588/there.html
تحياتي لكم ..

[طالبة سعودية]

السلام
بليييز وحدة من بنات المدرسة جايتلي تبي فزعة وطلبتكم لاتردوني وصراحة أنا أدرس منازل وعشان كذا مأعرف شي أسمه انجليزي وبعطيكم الأسئلة ومعليش إذا كان المكان غلط وطلبتكم ردوا بسرعة
وتفضلوا الأسئلة:
How can you fulfill your dreams?1

What attract people to Eiffel Tower?2

If he (play - plays - played) he would be tired.1

If she goes to school early, she (will - would) arrive on time.2

If you revised English, you would (answer - answers - answered) correctly.3

If I (do - does - did) my homework. I will be a good student.4

[طالبة سعودية]

ردوااااااااااا بسرعه

[Sanabsie]

How can you fulfill your dreams?1

What attract people to Eiffel Tower

هذيلا السؤالين جوابهم في الكتاب الاول كيف تحقق احلامك والثاني ايش الى عجب الناس في برج ايفل انا ماقدر اجيب اجابه صح ليهم لاكن لو تعرفي اجوبتهم بالعربي راح احولهم بالانجليزي

If he (play - plays - played) he would be tired.1

she goes to school early, she (will - would) arrive on time.2

f you revised English, you would (answer - answers - answered) correctly.3
If I (do - does - did) my homework. I will be a good student.4

الاجابات الى بلون الاحمر

سلام

[ToxicRain]

How can you fulfill your dreams?1
through hard work and determination, thinking outside the box helps too

What attract people to Eiffel Tower?2
it stands out too much not to be noticed :|
^
^
this isn't from the book, these are my own ideas


If he (play - plays - played) he would be tired.1
not as sure as I should be, but "Played" seems to make the most sense

If she goes to school early, she (will - would) arrive on time.2
Will
how the heck do you give lessons but can't figure this one O_o ?

If you revised English, you would (answer - answers - answered) correctly.3
"Answered"

If I (do - does - did) my homework. I will be a good student.4
Do


hope it helps ..

[ابوطلب]

الاصدقاء الحلوين
كيف الحال
ارجو منك ان تعلمني كيف اجيد اللغة الانجليزية
وسرعة الاطلاقه فيها

[ToxicRain]

طالب منكم تحويل المقطع الصوتي الى نص يعني اريده على شكل نص انجليزي

ان شاء الله هذا يساعد ...

البداية

World population aging at record rate
this is BreakingNewsEnglish.com

the world is getting older and older, not the planet, but the people who live on it.a new report reveals that the global population is growing at its fastest rate ever, the united states census bureau calculated there was just over half a billion over 65s in 2008.

Official predict this number will more than double to 1.3 billion by 2040. around 14% of the world's population will be retirement age

researchers say the number of elderly will soon outnumber the young for the first time in human history. this will have a big impact on our societies, economy and the way we live

An older population will push up pension and health care costs. the work force will have to pay much higher taxes to look after more old people.

America's national institute of aging reports : "aging is effecting every country in every part of the world. global aging is changing the social and economic nature of the planet and presenting difficult challenges

Japan is already dealing with these problems. and they are expected to get worse. by 2040 experts predict 1% of the Japanese population will be over 100 years old.

there is a booming industry in japan to cater for the aged. Engineers are developing robots to feed and clean up after the elderly. there are now robot companions on sale to keep old people company.

One positive effect of our aging population is that we need to think again when middle age and old age is. we now ofter view a s- *نهاية*

[ToxicRain]

الاصدقاء الحلوين
كيف الحال
ارجو منك ان تعلمني كيف اجيد اللغة الانجليزية
وسرعة الاطلاقه فيها

الممارسة احسن طريقة لتعلم اللغة :|

اقراء و شوف المواد اللي بالأنجليزي و في يوم من الأيام راح توصل لدرجة ان الأفكار في رأسك راح تتغير لغتها للأنجليزي (صدقني مو إشاعة ولا مبالغة ) ومنها بتتعلم اللغة

[SultanXp]

How can you fulfill your dreams?1

By working hard

What attract people to Eiffel Tower?

Because its too long and too beutiful