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    الصورة الرمزية sensei
    sensei غير متصل فارسة الرسم
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    !!Wake up

    hiiiii everyone this is my poem which I put before in the photoshop forum
    It's the best poem I ever wrote
    I wrote it before one year and half for my friend Because she is always in bad mood
    also she tried to kill herself with knife when she was a kid me too I tried to kill myself too << ;P I'm idiot
    anyway everyone have problems but don't ever think to leave this world
    ?.....be patient ok
    now read it ;D please


    People think you are strong
    But I'm sure they are wrong
    I've never seen someone weaker than you
    You can't win a fight against yourself too
    So please try hard to wake
    From this nightmare for my sake
    Please don't say I can't change my life
    And trying to leave this world with a knife
    I'm sure you can change it if you want
    But you think this is the end and you lost
    In this place of darkness forever
    And no one can help you ever
    Now I'm here to wake you
    From your nightmare and tell you
    Something you didn't know it
    Something you want to hear it
    Come with me my other half
    To start searching for the true life
    You will know that I'm right
    And you will know the meaning of the bright
    The bright of this life


    We are only friends but I called her my other half in the poem because she really looks like me in everything
    she likes what I like
    and do what I do
    and have the same interestings ^_^
    anyway... I need you opinions ^_^


    and thanks

    sensei
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة :: HiDEY :: ; 12-06-2007 الساعة 04:55 PM سبب آخر: Font size + abbreviation

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    الصورة الرمزية INFERNO
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    رد: !!Wake up

    wow very nice word

    i really like it

    specially at

    I've never seen someone weaker than you
    You can't win a fight against yourself too


    but please next time make the word lilbit bigger

    10x








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    رد: !!Wake up

    Thank you so much for the hard work & keep it up
    But please larger the font next time we barely can read it...
    We're the next generation of this nation

    (( سبحان الله وبحمده عدد خلقه ورضى نفسه وزنة عرشه ومداد كلماته ))

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    Pardon me sweetie, I am going to have to enlarg the font size you used
    : )

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    22-07-2006
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    رد: !!Wake up

    Back after inlarging the font
    : )
    Very nice words .. They can be put together a little bit better though
    I can sence what you meant by the poem
    But, I can't understand why would both of you try to commit suicide
    ?

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    الصورة الرمزية sensei
    sensei غير متصل فارسة الرسم
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    رد: !!Wake up

    wow very nice word

    i really like it

    specially at


    اقتباس:
    I've never seen someone weaker than you

    اقتباس:
    You can't win a fight against yourself too


    but please next time make the word lilbit bigger

    10x
    I'm really sorry >.< I didn't mean to write it very small
    but my handwriting is really small so I used to read stuff like that


    Thank you so much for the hard work & keep it up


    But please larger the font next time we barely can read it

    I'm sorry >.< I'm really really sorry

    I'll do my best next time... and wait for my poems

    Pardon me sweetie, I am going to have to enlarg the font size you used



    : )

    thanx ^_^ sooo much


    Very nice words .. They can be put together a little bit better though

    I'll try to do better next time

    I can sence what you meant by the poem

    the poem is clear... I didn't mean anything exept what you read

    But, I can't understand why would both of you try to commit suicide



    ?


    I've been bullied by my all my sisters who older than me
    I was only 8 when I tried to commit suicide... anyway
    they feel gulty now ^_^ I forgave them all
    it's not their problem anyway... they where teenagers
    I don't know why do I like to talk in this??? maybe because I became stronger by being bullied more than 8 years
    I'm glad about what happened in the past... thanks to allah then my sisteres I became stronger and don't care about what others think or say about me
    but about my friend... I don't really know but it's family's problems too





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