plz help me my exam is on Monday

[Happy-Go-Lucky]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

أولا.. أحب أشكر كل اللي فتحوا موضوعي :arabchatr

ثانيا.. عندي طلب أحس شوي صعب لكن بليز عن جد محتاجة مساعدتكم
في هذا الموضوع لأني كنت مشغولة من اسبوعين في الأمتحانات
وان شاء الله نتوفق

ثالثا.. بدخل في الموضوع


أبي أي شخص فيكم متفرغ يكتبلي Essay
عن تجربة مثيرة أو تعني لك الكثير
about an exeprience that means alot to you

ويكون المقال مقسم إلى:
1-introduction
2-two bodies
3-conclusion

وبليز الأسلوب يكون سهل لأن انجليزيتي محدوده
ومايكون أكثر من 35 سطر عشان راح أحفظه وأكتبه في امتحان المقال
يوم الأثنين :bawling:

بليز أبيه قبل يوم السبت عشان أبدأ أحفظه (مو ملاحظين اني صايره طراره وأتشرط)

وأشكر للمره الثانية الجميع والله يوفق الكل


:flirt:

Happy-Go-Lucky

E-mail: sabrina1983@hotmail.com

[TheDestroyer]

:33: ......:33:
صراحة الموضوع جميل جدا وانا راح احاول أبذل جهدي فيه بس ما أقدر أظمن
ان النتيجه تعجبك ....
:cool:

[Happy-Go-Lucky]

الأخ The Destroyer


جزاك الله ألف خير على المبادرة

والله يعينك عن جد

بس بليز اذا كتبت الموضوع خلي الكلمات بسيطة عشان

أحفظها بسهولة (ماقلت اني طراره واتشرط)

أختك Happy-Go-Lucky

[لازم..!!]

ممكن توضيح اكثر ؟

[TheDestroyer]

Well that’s what I made so far I hope that it satisfies your needs


And I am not sure if it’s grammatically correct so please if anyone


finds any mistake post it immediately




** An Experience that means a lot to you



My Trip to Singapore





I was so happy with my level of understanding with the English language when I was a 17 years old high school boy. But I did not have the chance to test it in a real situation it was always from the book to the paper. One day my father said “We are going to have the summer vacation in Singapore for about two weeks”. Although, that it was only two weeks I realized many things from it and it means a lot to me.



I was so happy that I will use my English language and interact with new people. As soon as we arrived I felt like I am in another world people speak the English language so easily and instantaneously. I was surprised that all the newspapers, advertisements, shop signs and even TV channels were in English. Moreover, I noticed that any 6 years child can speak English much better than me. Every time I speak with someone they stare at me and say” what did you say” or “what do you mean?” for the first time in my life I realized that I am not good enough with the English language people can not understand me. So, I became afraid from speaking in English and lost my confidence.



Gladly, my father noticed that and he asked me “Why are you afraid from speaking in English?” I tolled him “I am not good with it and my mind becomes blank when someone says “I did not understand you”. He smiled and said “I will tell you what to say and everything will be fine”. For the followed 4 or 5 days I focused in my fathers actions watching him every time he says something and he was teaching me what to say in any situation starting from “How much…..?”.After that I begun to build confidence and I started to take the initiative to start a conversation.



Although, that we only stayed for about 14 days those days were very special and I learned from them so much. Every time I speak in English I remember my father and I thank him too much for that experience and for being with me in my hardest moments.



TheDestroyer


so what do you think....?0

*you can get the file written in MS world from the link here

[Happy-Go-Lucky]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

أشكرك جزيل الشكر أخوي The Destroyer
وجزاك الله خير على المجهود اللي بذلته
وان شاء الله نردها لك في الأعياد :09:

بس اللي لاحظه من نظرتي السريعة :shock22: خطأ املائي
اللي هو الماضي من tell هو told لأنه من الأفعال الشاذة..
يله عادي حتى أنا أغلط في أبسط الأشياء

الموضوع جدا جميل وبسيط وسهل الحفظ :09:


وللمره الثانية أشكرك والله يوفقك


أختك Happy-Go-Lucky

[hunter-zero]

isn`t this considered cheating?
.............. i think you should try to improvise rather that memorise

[Happy-Go-Lucky]

الأخ hunter-zero

ممكن توضح كلامك ؟؟

[Mr.BM]

الحمد لله يعني إنحلت المشكله ....

[Happy-Go-Lucky]

:) الحمد لله وجاوبت :biggthump في الامتحان

thank you

[TheDestroyer]

:) :)
I am glald that you did well in the exam
:biggthump :biggthump
but next time try to do it all by yourself
:33: :biggrin: