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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ???? Am I Alone



مستر حريقة
16-04-2005, 12:20 AM
:أفكر: hi

i wrote a poem about beening alone and wuts the bad about it :o

hope u enjoy it :reporter:

?Am I Alone

,I get a funny feeling
.it comes from deep inside
,I get all mad and angry
.wanting to go and hide

,My doctor calls it Depression
.my dad says it's just me
,But the thoughts and feeling
.no one will ever be able to see

,Some say I'm Psycho
.some say i'm just weird
,It's like I'm different person
.and the old me just disappeared

,I get really edgy
.I want to commit suicide real bad
,Then I get a headache
.followed by feeling sad

,I wish I could get help
.I wish it would go away
,Maybe if i keep praying real hard
.it will some day


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Another_One
17-04-2005, 11:54 AM
u made me sad too

but i shouldn't run or hide too

me and you know Allah ...and he will take care of us if we take care of our selves
..................

:p Good brother .....keep writing ...we keep reading

springtime
17-04-2005, 01:41 PM
:biggthump ??Hello Nakash Roooos ....Is your nick name correct this time

How are you



Noooo you’re not alone …. We all have this sort of different and confusing feelings from time to time but to tell you the truth, I have never thought of committing suicide , no matter what, we shouldn’t go that far



Anyway, if this happens to you once in a while, you really don’t have to worry, ...it’s natural….to get angry, be sad then happy
It means that you’re still alive


But if this happens to you all the time or even most of the time, I ‘m afraid to tell you that you might be facing a problem, you might be weird or psycho and you really need to consult a psychologist…….:33: just kidding ..to cheer you
:biggrin: up

???Let us know when you figure this out...okay

Thank you for this poem....
Best Regards

Abdullah
17-04-2005, 02:22 PM
If you really meant everything you said, and you think it is reaching the thought of suicide. then I think you should see a psychologist and there's absolutely no shame on that.

But if you were writing emotional poems cuz you are creative and you can feel people's emotions, then I applaud you for this good piece. Steven Kings always wrote about depression, anger and horror things, but he is nontheless still breating ;)

I am just hoping you are from the second kind, and wish you best luck in your writings.

Da S.O.S
18-04-2005, 03:31 PM
hiiii nakash
it's really a great poem
and it made me so sad too:(
but the words that u used...are so expressive
keep it up ..

مستر حريقة
18-04-2005, 10:48 PM
u made me sad too


but i shouldn't run or hide too

me and you know Allah ...and he will take care of us if we take care of our selves
..................

:p Good brother .....keep writing ...we keep reading



sorry for making u sad bro Another_One

iam not really gonna run or hide cuz its just a piece of my writting :D

dont worry about me ;) I'll take care of myself
hope u do too
*************************************
thanks for the nice post and keep it on pls


تحياتي.......( نكاش روس ) :biggrin:

مستر حريقة
18-04-2005, 10:57 PM
:biggthump ??
Hello Nakash Roooos ....Is your nick name correct this time




hey hi, ya this is the right name :09:



How are you

iam alright thanks i hope u be fine too


Noooo you’re not alone …. We all have this sort of different and confusing feelings from time to time but to tell you the truth, I have never thought of committing suicide , no matter what, we shouldn’t go that far




dont worry i didnt really mean that its ajust apoem that i wrote :o
so take care of urself




Anyway, if this happens to you once in a while, you really don’t have to worry, ...it’s natural….to get angry, be sad then happy
It means that you’re still alive

well i actually happens sometimes
but thanks anyway dude

But if this happens to you all the time or even most of the time, I ‘m afraid to tell you that you might be facing a problem, you might be weird or psycho and you really need to consult a psychologist…….:33: just kidding ..to cheer you
:biggrin: up
loooooooooooooooooooool

wuts wrong guys its just a piece of writing

i didnt really mean it :reporter:



???Let us know when you figure this out...okay

thanks and take care of urself and ur friends as well pls




Thank you for this poem....


ur welcome bro
thanks for posting too
and sorry if i made u feel bad :icon6:


تحياتي..........( نكاش روس ) :biggrin:

مستر حريقة
18-04-2005, 11:05 PM
If you really meant everything you said, and you think it is reaching the thought of suicide. then I think you should see a psychologist and there's absolutely no shame on that.

sorry dude i didnt really mean it
its just a poem and i like to write poems
so dont worry i'll never go to psychologist doctor:09:

just take care, ha?



But if you were writing emotional poems cuz you are creative and you can feel people's emotions, then I applaud you for this good piece. Steven Kings always wrote about depression, anger and horror things, but he is nontheless still breating ;)

actually yeah it is cuz i like this type of poems;)


I am just hoping you are from the second kind, and wish you best luck in your writings.

ur wishes is there bro

thanks for posting
good luck for u too :reporter:


تحياتي....(نكاش روس) :icon6:

مستر حريقة
18-04-2005, 11:09 PM
hiiii nakash
it's really a great poem
and it made me so sad too:(
but the words that u used...are
keep it up ..
so expressive

thanks dear for cute reply:أفكر:

sorry for making u sad:08:

but wut do u mean its so expensive words? :33:

thanks anyway dude

keep it on too


تحياتي......(نكاش روس) :icon6:

المكاويه
20-04-2005, 05:04 PM
I wish I could get help
.I wish it would go away
,Maybe if i keep praying real hard
.it will some day




sure brother
one should just keep praying
i swear to Allah that this is the most useful way to get wht u want
so u shouldnt have used "Maybe
;) u should have said "Certainly




It's like I'm different person
.and the old me just disappeared

most of us keep changing
just look to urself a year ago
;) and see the difference
:the Q is
???r we changing to being better ppl
or
????r we changing to being worse ppl
:o this is the real problem,, i believe





bless u brother
:أفكر: and thanks alot for this nice poem

مستر حريقة
20-05-2005, 09:00 PM
sorry my dear sister for posting here so late
but i was just busy
i couldn't help it

thanks for ur nice words

may God bless u too dear

تحياتي....( نكاش روس ) :reporter: