مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ???? Am I Alone
مستر حريقة
16-04-2005, 12:20 AM
:أفكر: hi
i wrote a poem about beening alone and wuts the bad about it :o
hope u enjoy it :reporter:
?Am I Alone
,I get a funny feeling
.it comes from deep inside
,I get all mad and angry
.wanting to go and hide
,My doctor calls it Depression
.my dad says it's just me
,But the thoughts and feeling
.no one will ever be able to see
,Some say I'm Psycho
.some say i'm just weird
,It's like I'm different person
.and the old me just disappeared
,I get really edgy
.I want to commit suicide real bad
,Then I get a headache
.followed by feeling sad
,I wish I could get help
.I wish it would go away
,Maybe if i keep praying real hard
.it will some day
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Another_One
17-04-2005, 11:54 AM
u made me sad too
but i shouldn't run or hide too
me and you know Allah ...and he will take care of us if we take care of our selves
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:p Good brother .....keep writing ...we keep reading
springtime
17-04-2005, 01:41 PM
:biggthump ??Hello Nakash Roooos ....Is your nick name correct this time
How are you
Noooo you’re not alone …. We all have this sort of different and confusing feelings from time to time but to tell you the truth, I have never thought of committing suicide , no matter what, we shouldn’t go that far
Anyway, if this happens to you once in a while, you really don’t have to worry, ...it’s natural….to get angry, be sad then happy
It means that you’re still alive
But if this happens to you all the time or even most of the time, I ‘m afraid to tell you that you might be facing a problem, you might be weird or psycho and you really need to consult a psychologist…….:33: just kidding ..to cheer you
:biggrin: up
???Let us know when you figure this out...okay
Thank you for this poem....
Best Regards
Abdullah
17-04-2005, 02:22 PM
If you really meant everything you said, and you think it is reaching the thought of suicide. then I think you should see a psychologist and there's absolutely no shame on that.
But if you were writing emotional poems cuz you are creative and you can feel people's emotions, then I applaud you for this good piece. Steven Kings always wrote about depression, anger and horror things, but he is nontheless still breating ;)
I am just hoping you are from the second kind, and wish you best luck in your writings.
Da S.O.S
18-04-2005, 03:31 PM
hiiii nakash
it's really a great poem
and it made me so sad too:(
but the words that u used...are so expressive
keep it up ..
مستر حريقة
18-04-2005, 10:48 PM
u made me sad too
but i shouldn't run or hide too
me and you know Allah ...and he will take care of us if we take care of our selves
..................
:p Good brother .....keep writing ...we keep reading
sorry for making u sad bro Another_One
iam not really gonna run or hide cuz its just a piece of my writting :D
dont worry about me ;) I'll take care of myself
hope u do too
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thanks for the nice post and keep it on pls
تحياتي.......( نكاش روس ) :biggrin:
مستر حريقة
18-04-2005, 10:57 PM
:biggthump ??
Hello Nakash Roooos ....Is your nick name correct this time
hey hi, ya this is the right name :09:
How are you
iam alright thanks i hope u be fine too
Noooo you’re not alone …. We all have this sort of different and confusing feelings from time to time but to tell you the truth, I have never thought of committing suicide , no matter what, we shouldn’t go that far
dont worry i didnt really mean that its ajust apoem that i wrote :o
so take care of urself
Anyway, if this happens to you once in a while, you really don’t have to worry, ...it’s natural….to get angry, be sad then happy
It means that you’re still alive
well i actually happens sometimes
but thanks anyway dude
But if this happens to you all the time or even most of the time, I ‘m afraid to tell you that you might be facing a problem, you might be weird or psycho and you really need to consult a psychologist…….:33: just kidding ..to cheer you
:biggrin: up
loooooooooooooooooooool
wuts wrong guys its just a piece of writing
i didnt really mean it :reporter:
???Let us know when you figure this out...okay
thanks and take care of urself and ur friends as well pls
Thank you for this poem....
ur welcome bro
thanks for posting too
and sorry if i made u feel bad :icon6:
تحياتي..........( نكاش روس ) :biggrin:
مستر حريقة
18-04-2005, 11:05 PM
If you really meant everything you said, and you think it is reaching the thought of suicide. then I think you should see a psychologist and there's absolutely no shame on that.
sorry dude i didnt really mean it
its just a poem and i like to write poems
so dont worry i'll never go to psychologist doctor:09:
just take care, ha?
But if you were writing emotional poems cuz you are creative and you can feel people's emotions, then I applaud you for this good piece. Steven Kings always wrote about depression, anger and horror things, but he is nontheless still breating ;)
actually yeah it is cuz i like this type of poems;)
I am just hoping you are from the second kind, and wish you best luck in your writings.
ur wishes is there bro
thanks for posting
good luck for u too :reporter:
تحياتي....(نكاش روس) :icon6:
مستر حريقة
18-04-2005, 11:09 PM
hiiii nakash
it's really a great poem
and it made me so sad too:(
but the words that u used...are
keep it up ..
so expressive
thanks dear for cute reply:أفكر:
sorry for making u sad:08:
but wut do u mean its so expensive words? :33:
thanks anyway dude
keep it on too
تحياتي......(نكاش روس) :icon6:
المكاويه
20-04-2005, 05:04 PM
I wish I could get help
.I wish it would go away
,Maybe if i keep praying real hard
.it will some day
sure brother
one should just keep praying
i swear to Allah that this is the most useful way to get wht u want
so u shouldnt have used "Maybe
;) u should have said "Certainly
It's like I'm different person
.and the old me just disappeared
most of us keep changing
just look to urself a year ago
;) and see the difference
:the Q is
???r we changing to being better ppl
or
????r we changing to being worse ppl
:o this is the real problem,, i believe
bless u brother
:أفكر: and thanks alot for this nice poem
مستر حريقة
20-05-2005, 09:00 PM
sorry my dear sister for posting here so late
but i was just busy
i couldn't help it
thanks for ur nice words
may God bless u too dear
تحياتي....( نكاش روس ) :reporter:
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