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    Unhappy ???? Am I Alone

    hi

    i wrote a poem about beening alone and wuts the bad about it

    hope u enjoy it

    ?Am I Alone

    ,I get a funny feeling
    .it comes from deep inside
    ,I get all mad and angry
    .wanting to go and hide

    ,My doctor calls it Depression
    .my dad says it's just me
    ,But the thoughts and feeling
    .no one will ever be able to see

    ,Some say I'm Psycho
    .some say i'm just weird
    ,It's like I'm different person
    .and the old me just disappeared

    ,I get really edgy
    .I want to commit suicide real bad
    ,Then I get a headache
    .followed by feeling sad

    ,I wish I could get help
    .I wish it would go away
    ,Maybe if i keep praying real hard
    .it will some day


    :shock22: :shock22: :shock22: :shock22: :shock22: :shock22: :shock22: :shock22:

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    u made me sad too

    but i shouldn't run or hide too

    me and you know Allah ...and he will take care of us if we take care of our selves
    ..................

    Good brother .....keep writing ...we keep reading

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    ??Hello Nakash Roooos ....Is your nick name correct this time

    How are you



    Noooo you’re not alone …. We all have this sort of different and confusing feelings from time to time but to tell you the truth, I have never thought of committing suicide , no matter what, we shouldn’t go that far



    Anyway, if this happens to you once in a while, you really don’t have to worry, ...it’s natural….to get angry, be sad then happy
    It means that you’re still alive


    But if this happens to you all the time or even most of the time, I ‘m afraid to tell you that you might be facing a problem, you might be weird or psycho and you really need to consult a psychologist……. just kidding ..to cheer you
    up

    ???Let us know when you figure this out...okay

    Thank you for this poem....
    Best Regards

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    If you really meant everything you said, and you think it is reaching the thought of suicide. then I think you should see a psychologist and there's absolutely no shame on that.

    But if you were writing emotional poems cuz you are creative and you can feel people's emotions, then I applaud you for this good piece. Steven Kings always wrote about depression, anger and horror things, but he is nontheless still breating

    I am just hoping you are from the second kind, and wish you best luck in your writings.

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    hiiii nakash
    it's really a great poem
    and it made me so sad too
    but the words that u used...are so expressive
    keep it up ..





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    u made me sad too


    but i shouldn't run or hide too

    me and you know Allah ...and he will take care of us if we take care of our selves
    ..................

    Good brother .....keep writing ...we keep reading

    sorry for making u sad bro Another_One

    iam not really gonna run or hide cuz its just a piece of my writting

    dont worry about me I'll take care of myself
    hope u do too
    *************************************
    thanks for the nice post and keep it on pls
    تحياتي.......( نكاش روس )

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    Hello Nakash Roooos ....Is your nick name correct this time


    hey hi, ya this is the right name


    How are you


    iam alright thanks i hope u be fine too

    Noooo you’re not alone …. We all have this sort of different and confusing feelings from time to time but to tell you the truth, I have never thought of committing suicide , no matter what, we shouldn’t go that far


    dont worry i didnt really mean that its ajust apoem that i wrote
    so take care of urself



    Anyway, if this happens to you once in a while, you really don’t have to worry, ...it’s natural….to get angry, be sad then happy
    It means that you’re still alive


    well i actually happens sometimes
    but thanks anyway dude
    But if this happens to you all the time or even most of the time, I ‘m afraid to tell you that you might be facing a problem, you might be weird or psycho and you really need to consult a psychologist……. just kidding ..to cheer you
    up

    loooooooooooooooooooool

    wuts wrong guys its just a piece of writing

    i didnt really mean it


    ???Let us know when you figure this out...okay


    thanks and take care of urself and ur friends as well pls



    Thank you for this poem....


    ur welcome bro
    thanks for posting too
    and sorry if i made u feel bad :icon6:
    تحياتي..........( نكاش روس )

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    If you really meant everything you said, and you think it is reaching the thought of suicide. then I think you should see a psychologist and there's absolutely no shame on that.
    sorry dude i didnt really mean it
    its just a poem and i like to write poems
    so dont worry i'll never go to psychologist doctor

    just take care, ha?


    But if you were writing emotional poems cuz you are creative and you can feel people's emotions, then I applaud you for this good piece. Steven Kings always wrote about depression, anger and horror things, but he is nontheless still breating
    actually yeah it is cuz i like this type of poems

    I am just hoping you are from the second kind, and wish you best luck in your writings.
    ur wishes is there bro

    thanks for posting
    good luck for u too
    تحياتي....(نكاش روس) :icon6:

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    hiiii nakash
    it's really a great poem
    and it made me so sad too
    but the words that u used...are
    keep it up ..
    so expressive

    thanks dear for cute reply

    sorry for making u sad

    but wut do u mean its so expensive words?

    thanks anyway dude

    keep it on too
    تحياتي......(نكاش روس) :icon6:


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    I wish I could get help
    .I wish it would go away

    ,Maybe if i keep praying real hard
    .it will some day



    sure brother
    one should just keep praying
    i swear to Allah that this is the most useful way to get wht u want
    so u shouldnt have used "Maybe
    u should have said "Certainly



    It's like I'm different person
    .and the old me just disappeared


    most of us keep changing
    just look to urself a year ago
    and see the difference
    :the Q is
    ???r we changing to being better ppl
    or
    ????r we changing to being worse ppl
    this is the real problem,, i believe





    bless u brother
    and thanks alot for this nice poem
    سبحان الله و الحمد لله و لا اله الا الله و الله أكبر
    لا اله الا انت سبحانك اني كنت من الظالمين

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    sorry my dear sister for posting here so late
    but i was just busy
    i couldn't help it

    thanks for ur nice words

    may God bless u too dear

    تحياتي....( نكاش روس )

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